|Reviews for Dudley's Girlfriend|
| leonsmith chapter 1 . 11/9
That's such a heteronormative thing to say, why would being gay add or subtract? You would have to assume that being straight is the default for the knowledge that he would be gay to 'add' anything; as if you need a special reason to make a character gay. Besides which, it does add something, it illuminates his relationship to Grindelwald.
| Godogma chapter 6 . 11/2
Snakes hear through vibrations I'd send you the scientific link but Fanfic dot net would just eat it and it's a whole mess of stuff to try and type out. It's not hard to find though. Christian Christensen and his team proved it.
They lack an external ear, not all the apparati that make up the ear.
Snakes also have nictitating membranes which is known as the "third eyelid" colloquially.
Also, the all spark is NOT a rock - in the movie continuity it's metallic and in the others it's basically Transformers heaven.
| BillBrink chapter 12 . 7/14
Aw, come on! Finish this one for us. You could always add some tension by having one of them being potioned or abducted, something that would threaten their relationship. Now that it's public knowledge, one of the bad guys would love to ruin Harry's blissful life. What better way than to get to Hermione somehow. BTW, love your talent. Thanks.
| suebt chapter 12 . 5/21
This is one of the most erotic things I've ever read. I do hope you come back and finish it at some point.
| lemonysniicket chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
T! At first I thought Hermione would kill him, but she instead went along with it! Amazing
| Vincewind'sTaylor chapter 12 . 8/1/2014
This is a great story with a good build up and I like that it doesn't jump to the sex straight away like some of your other stories. I think some of the other stuff is basically PWoP (porn without plot) but mostly soft-core porn. I guess maybe romance porn might be a better description. The only problem is once the sex shows up there doesn't seem to be any further plot / relationship development. What happened to Harry wanting to ask Hermione to marry him? I hope you come back to this story at some point, seems like it could be completed in one or two chapters.
| So4ie Que Vanity chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
This chapter is good can't wait for the next one!
| YaGHeofttHaeLubvit216 chapter 12 . 7/14/2014
A very nice story.
Heavy on the private details but what can you do?
Thank you for all your hard work composing this while doing college full time, job, relationships, et al, ad nauseum...
| YaGHeofttHaeLubvit216 chapter 10 . 7/14/2014
Is there such a thing as chocolate whipped cream?
(Probably, but it seems a bit unique to my 'taste'.
Your story reminds me of my wife and my honeymoon lo, these many years ago...
| YaGHeofttHaeLubvit216 chapter 7 . 7/14/2014
In your author notes were you channeling Autin Powers?
Also, it seems that you've referenced a website but didn't include the URL...
Maybe stripped it off?
Nicely done chapter.
| YaGHeofttHaeLubvit216 chapter 3 . 7/13/2014
I loved your Harry's way of dealing with the situation...
And especially enjoyed Robert's 'well done, my boy!'
And so to you, well done young lady!
| Raindancerwings chapter 12 . 4/17/2014
Aaah! I love your story! Please keep writing on it!
| jupimako chapter 6 . 4/15/2014
I love your Harry! He's great. This story is just wonderful.
| jupimako chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Very cute start!
| Fraulein Takoor chapter 3 . 3/18/2014