Reviews for The demoness
Wicked.A chapter 8 . 10/2/2020
This is nice
BURNERACC chapter 8 . 6/4/2017
Bwahahahah! I love this! The characters were all so well-portrayed. Not to mention that there are so many places you could take this! Nya~
Cxroder chapter 8 . 12/21/2015
WHAT DOGGONE MONTH IS IT? HOLY COW!? WHERE IS THE STORY?
Guest chapter 7 . 10/26/2014
I HATE NANA there I said it! Go inner voice!
MochiLovesGilbert chapter 7 . 4/29/2013
Yay magic lessons :D
MochiLovesGilbert chapter 5 . 4/29/2013
BROOO
I really like this :D
But a little critique for ya, Diclonius. Not always Diclonii.
MochiLovesGilbert chapter 4 . 4/29/2013
So that's what they see hell as :o
The facilities o.o
MochiLovesGilbert chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
:o
MochiLovesGilbert chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
Oh Nana... poor thing.
MochiLovesGilbert chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
I like :D
Rex888 chapter 3 . 12/18/2012
sorry, been a while since i saw elfen lied, is nana also nyuu
Notthegovernment chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
I don't even LIKE harry potter that much and I love this story! Very good, OOC stuff aside.
Leopard chapter 7 . 10/24/2012
Nyuuuu its goood more needed more neeeded! Your making me like Malfoy! You should bring other characters from harry potter in this too HA HA imagion their faces if they see Cute nana.

Dont worry about spelling to. I cant spell XD
Epic Timelady chapter 7 . 10/1/2012
Yay! A good diclonus story!
Nemesis100 chapter 6 . 3/16/2012
Excuse me, this is actually my second review to your story after having read all of it up to chapter 7.

There is something i forgot to add in my review in chapter 7. It's just a small detail that i believe you might already know, but also deserves a bit of attention.

You sometimes use the term "Diclonii" for singular form. I think it would be better if you used "Diclonius" for singular form and "Diclonii" for plural, as it resembles a Latin suffix, if i am not mistaken.

Anyway, its your story, do as you wish with it. I really love it and I hope you continue it.

Thanks again.
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