|Reviews for One Time Too Many|
| filteredlight chapter 2 . 1/17
Every time I read this, I get a good laugh. Thanks for such an enjoyable short story! :)
| Vela513 chapter 2 . 12/31/2015
Also too awesomely hilarious!
| Vela513 chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
I am laughing. So. Hard. :D This is awesome. Pure awesome. Especially the part of Miles. All of Miles. He's the best. So funny!
| jpgFury chapter 2 . 11/15/2013
I loved the honest interest from the Bots! They came across equal parts innocent and hilarious.
I really enjoyed this!
| DelinquentDuo chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
| TrisakAminawn chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
Hmm...I honestly think that, for clarity and real communication of what the actual problem is, phrases including 'degrading,' 'rude, in the sense it implies the person you're being rude to isn't worth politeness,' and 'it's like you think we're just dumb animals' would have been efficacious.
Also 'dehumanizing, even though I realize that seems like nonsense to you because you're only interested because we're human, but humans would only do this to other humans if they felt those humans had no right to privacy, dignity, or freedom, which is to say weren't really people. I know you don't mean any harm, freedom is the right of all sentient beings and all, but...'
Seriously. Porn stars are looked down on for simulating being in the position they keep putting Mikaela and Sam in, and the only other demographic subject to the same casual scrutiny of their sex lives is, historically, slaves. Apart from all the obvious taboos they're walking all over, they are inadvertently engaging in some incredibly negative social typing.
Wouldn't really work in a humour fic though, I guess.
| RandomCitizen chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Lol. If you really want to scare them. Show them a birthing video, like when Mrs. Lennox gave birth video, and they'll wonder why we'd go through such torture! Can you do that?
| Riyappe Paws chapter 2 . 2/26/2013
I had to take brakes while reading this one. I was laughing so hard for most of it that I felt all the blood that rushed to my face would make it burst. I like the formatting you used. Story, memory, story, memory, and such. Nicely put, and EVERY funny.
| Hebi R chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
Dolphins mate for pleasure; maybe the humans could suggest a study of other highly intelligent mammals?
| Uniquely chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
Haha! Oh noes... :-/
| Agent 0r4ng3 chapter 2 . 10/11/2012
Oh my gosh, this was so great! I ended up almost snorting a sandwich out when I read a few of these lines! Sheer genius!
And Bumblebee, oh my gosh!
| surxi25 chapter 2 . 6/16/2012
Oh God, this was comedy gold. I laughed my ass off the whole time (just like Miles lol), and I loved the fact that the humor wasn't cheap or vulgar (not sth I can say about Bayverse, but I digress). Everything was brilliant, especiallly the Bots you chose to include (why is Prowl so adorable?)
Here, have an Internet. You deserve it :D
| DreamFeathers chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
KYAHA! There's definitely a mature way of handling stuff and answering questions about sexuality and soft things through with the mechs. But if that'd been all happening to me as badly and often as for the poor kids i'd be
*brow twitching as gives the mechs a happy sosiopath grin* "First, i'm gonna kill myself. Then, i'm going to kill you! Comprede?"
| Golfbabe87 chapter 2 . 3/19/2011
Very very amausing! I have no doubtthese problems would actually occur especially with these humans that the AUtobots have befriended. haha
| Omicron the IceQueen chapter 2 . 1/31/2011
Dear god it took me so long to recuvering from laughing my spleen out. This, you, are amazing! I don't think there's any better way of saying it, this story more then made my day. made my weekend all better!