|Reviews for If the Foundations Be Destroyed|
| Guest chapter 33 . 9/7
This story is amazing!
| Guest chapter 33 . 9/7
| Guest chapter 30 . 4/28
I'm on chapter 30 and it's getting a bit bullcrappy. I doubt he would transfer the batmans money for a couple of lives. And he still hasn't escaped yet, that's so BORING. My patience is waning, having captive Bruce is getting tiring to read. MOVE THE PLOT ALONG? I get you have ideas but you're missing the point that when things are drawn out too long they usually HAVE too many ideas. Just cause the info is there means that you don't use it. You use excessive info as your backups, your guidelines, and your clinchers. They're drawn to those ideas intertwined in the writing so deeply that only psychologically in an in-depth analysis like re-reading can it be seen, but you're just writing that out and it loses its luster. Please just wrap it up. I like action, that means you're lacking in action. More badassery would be nice
| not loged in chapter 33 . 3/17/2016
i have enjoyed this immensely and have reread and reread it about 20 times in total ..maybe more . when that golden day comes when you finally update after all this time wev been apart , i hope it flows forth like a fountain of information, that will take 3 days to clean .
love zeva100 (real author name ..i ..was to lazy to log in )
| UntiedHeartbeat chapter 22 . 3/29/2015
Why do you make Bruce look so weak? He's freaking Batman. A few dogs wouldn't be a problem, right? But then again...those dogs are frightening.
| UntiedHeartbeat chapter 33 . 2/23/2015
I'm just waiting for Bruce to totally lose his temper. The Joker is really pushing it and I want Bruce to at least hit him in the face with his real strength. This is so frustrating. I know he can't do that because revealing a part of Batman's personality is extremly risky. But I just want to see him knock the clown out. He's irking me. I love the Joker, he's my favourite character, but I'm totally emphasising with Bruce TTTT
| SailorSea chapter 33 . 3/26/2014
Hey I know it's been a while but please finish this story it's incredible! And you write the joker flawlessly! He is so in character and I can never predict what he is going to say next
| Mesonoxian chapter 33 . 6/16/2013
This fic is soooooo good! Can't wait for more :D
| 13AkiraKuranXIII chapter 33 . 5/28/2013
Brilliant story. I love reading Bruce-as-Joker's-Hostage stories, and this one easily tops them all. I wish you'd continue it.
| kaplunk chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
I've read this story multiple times and I know its been years but I feel this story needs more chapters, please update if possible its so good and I want to see the jokers reaction to Bruce hiding his injury and whether Bruce can keep his secret or not, its just such a well written fan fiction and there are not enough dark knight fan fiction
| Beloved Daughter chapter 33 . 3/26/2013
Great story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I only wish that you would continue writing this story... :(
| Baba chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
I found your fic and I'm totally hooked! Terribly curious. I really do hope you will continue this story. Since you updated your profile half a year ago, I'd say you're still active... Go for it! Don't leave it like this!
| liesmyth chapter 33 . 2/8/2013
Damn, talk about a cliffhanger. I really hope you'll continue this.
Still, even if you dont, you should know I really enjoyed this. Like, a whole freakin lot. Thank you for sharing, you made my whole week.
| liesmyth chapter 32 . 2/8/2013
I don't think I know enough words to explain how much I love this. I'm getting repetitive, i know, but still... amazing.
| liesmyth chapter 30 . 2/8/2013
I'm loving this more every chapter.