Reviews for Under The Dark Moon
firstgreenisgold chapter 3 . 3/5/2011
love it!
Domenique chapter 3 . 9/16/2010
So she has extra gifts? What happend to her,this chapter was a bit confusing,im just glad shes not a useless love sick chick any more
Domenique chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
So I love Edward and his character, and he and Bella should be together as SM intended them to be,but I have never been the biggest fan of Bella’s character, in a way I find her weak, she should be angry at him for leaving her, and I also feal the Voltury is a bit more stronger than this chapter describes them, I was surprised that Jane did not show up and set things strait, however I love the direction the story is taking, I think Edward should be fighting for her,but she should be stronger this time round,As a vampire I think she will be showing a bit more of a different character first few chapters is very sad, I feel verry sorry for Bella but at the same time I want her to grow a bit now,I hope to see Jacob appear a bit later again maybe? Keep up the good work, im enjoying you’re writing style. You are very good at creating a feeling of sympathy with the characters, and as for Felix and Eddie …hope to see ed kick his huge ass!


Domenique chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
This was very sad,but im so glad Bella wasn’t as blinded and stupid as the first time round,I was expecting her to be a bit more angered,cant wiat for bella to be a vamp.I would advise any one whose writing the bella and voltury theme to take a read at one of my fave story’s it listed under favourite story’s as Unloved Unwanted, I think you will like the first few chapters, keep up the great work
Sonja Whitlock chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
I love your story. I can't wait to read more.
becka chapter 3 . 12/20/2009
W-O-W that story is getting good! Is bella turning evil or dark? It will be good of she turns evil! MWHA i love this story!

Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 3 . 8/18/2009
good chapter
The Doctor Rose chapter 2 . 7/25/2009
omg i hat cliff hangers lol
Taeniaea chapter 3 . 4/13/2009
great story
eatsleepdance411 chapter 3 . 2/3/2009
This is such a cool story. Update soon please!
meow114 chapter 3 . 1/26/2009
nice story i hope bella doesn't end up with edward :P

(edward is more evil then Volturi) plz update soon
Kiren-D chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
UNBELIEVABLE! In a good way :)...I had always wondered what It'd be like If she agreed to Aro's offer.
high-off-skittles-XP chapter 3 . 12/7/2008
This is a really great story and i can't wait for more chaprers. I wish you luck in writting them. :3

bye bye

miktokki chapter 3 . 11/22/2008
omigawsh! wats happening to bella! plz write the next chapii!
Forever1918 chapter 3 . 11/14/2008
You HAVE to write more! i'm in love with this story!
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