|Reviews for Me Too|
| VampireAngel94 chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
LOL thats sweet
| FabulousKilljoyPhilosophy chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
yay, sweet fic. very cute, i love it.
| b1oom chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Hm. You have potential as a romance writer, but you need to learn how to establish a tone. The diolouge doesn't really work here because it's all very phoney and melodramatic. People just don't have conversationions like that ("you're my soul, blahblahblah..."), it's not realistic. It wasn't a bad concept, but don't rush into it with them suddenly professing their love for each other. You need to be more subtle. Think about the way each character acts, how they deal with tension, and construct a scene aroud that.
"I'm glad they sent you to spy on me Agent Scully."
"Me too Mulder. Me too."
That last bit is enough on it's own. When showing that they love each other, you don't need anything more blatant and obvious than that.
| Wishlist93 chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
aww, cute! I loved it )
| Dru619 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
aw very sweet and fluffy. :) I can see Mulder just laying on the floor like nothing is out of the ordinary. lol
| gillian dana chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
omg! this is so sweet! Great job!
| loveintrainwrecks chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Amazing story! I love how Scully asked, "Do you honestly not see the effect you have on me?" This really sheds a great light on their relationship. Again, great story! :)