Reviews for Her Look Of Pain
thecolorcoral chapter 2 . 12/5/2008
please update soon!
Jood2395 chapter 3 . 12/5/2008
Omg! Keep writing! Keep writing!
Kristen chapter 3 . 11/30/2008

i love it )

u must update son

i miss Jasper already

Brittney-Cullen-Belikov chapter 3 . 11/27/2008
hey... this is an awesome story. You should keep going!
emchelle chapter 3 . 11/27/2008
This is really intense, but really good. I'm captivated. Can't wait to see what comes next...
TaylorxxTwihard chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
Oh my goodness.

Poor Alice!

Eternally Seventeen chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
Woww...excellent two chapters. Your writing is just AMAZING and the descriptions are lovely. I especially likes the part where Edward explains why things are so hard for Jasper, to Alice. Great going and please do update soon!
WanderingSoul2014 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
oh please please please continue this.. I LOVE IT.. its so cute, and sad but

Great story :D
SacreJambons chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
NO! You can't leave this as a one shot, how am i supposed to know what happens next?
Jalicelovee chapter 1 . 9/1/2008

-has heart attack-

Jazzy come back!

this was really good

but i hate that Jasper left

but it was still good


ah i'm torn

Chosy chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
No no no NO! He can't leave her he...he just can't! :(

if you continue - happy end please! :.-(

if not - well then i imagine a happy end on my own *lala* (yes, i kinda live in my own world, but don't worry - they know me there and fully except me *g* ;) )
jennwrote chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
good job! you have to continue it!
ShannonTheresa chapter 1 . 8/21/2008

u must must must keep going with this!

please i'm begging?
clumsy-vampires-dont-exist chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
What I meant was that I would have liked to see more anger, drama and stuff. And the blood leaking from her arm meant where the knife sliced her, I dont know if it was her arm or not, but where else would a knife slice you by accident?
mymarlena chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Where's the action? where's the "Jasper! STOP!" Where's the screams? The blood leaking from her arm? This isn't very dramatic.
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