|Reviews for Occlumency is on Monday|
| Aubrey Mills chapter 3 . 9/24
Hm... Suspicious. But awesome book so far
| Zoha Ven chapter 3 . 6/26
Isn't Jrowk Ling a mixture of JK Rowling? JrowK ling? Great, so far!
| Mol-dune chapter 7 . 5/21
Please finish this story!
| saveyour950 chapter 4 . 12/4/2015
I don't mind the chapter lengths (although I like the long ones more). Can't wait for tea!
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/12/2015
Ok... So , I rather like your story.
I think it's well written, and Severus and Harry aren't terribly OOC. Furthermore, your characters act in a somewhat reasonable way ( I mean, there is a reason for what and how they do things).
However, there is something I don't understand. SS, a teacher, strikes his most hated student, knocking him down AFTER belittling him. You do imply that such an action could have consequences if anyone else were to learn about it, but, while SS and HP admit that it was badly done, both of them seem to 'get over it' really fast. I mean, both of them seem to regard Snape as the one who was victimized: while it's true that Harry should not have been so disrespectful of a teacher, why do both of them feel the need for his apologies, while Severus gets away with a reluctant 'sorry'?
| roxanne black chapter 7 . 12/7/2014
I really Love this fanfic! Are you still carrying on with it?
| Sophie chapter 3 . 10/29/2014
Jrowk Ling - Love it. Rock on fellow Potterheads!
| Sophie chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
WOW! LOVE IT!
| lilyflower101 chapter 7 . 6/4/2014
love it so far! more please! :)
| kittyranma chapter 7 . 5/25/2014
I've been enjoying this series and I can hardly wait for the rest.
| ToastandOut chapter 3 . 5/22/2014
Love this, update soon?
| Mistress DragonFlame chapter 7 . 5/3/2014
Interesting story; though highly awkward when Snap hugged Harry.
I guess it's not "TBC" since it was last updated in 2010.
| XxXxSketcherxXxX chapter 3 . 1/27/2014
i like what you did wigth the book artist Jrowk Ling as ya know J.K. Rowling
| Katie Who chapter 7 . 1/11/2014
Okay, so this story is really awesome! :) You have an amazing writing style and I totally love the plot. :) It's nice to read how Snape does try to change a bit so he can get to Harry. I really enjoy reading and I hope that you'll upload a new chapter some day because your story is absolutely worth reading and waiting, too. ;)
All the best. :)
| 1sunfun chapter 7 . 10/29/2013