Reviews for Occlumency is on Monday
Guest chapter 3 . 1/12
Ok... So , I rather like your story.
I think it's well written, and Severus and Harry aren't terribly OOC. Furthermore, your characters act in a somewhat reasonable way ( I mean, there is a reason for what and how they do things).

However, there is something I don't understand. SS, a teacher, strikes his most hated student, knocking him down AFTER belittling him. You do imply that such an action could have consequences if anyone else were to learn about it, but, while SS and HP admit that it was badly done, both of them seem to 'get over it' really fast. I mean, both of them seem to regard Snape as the one who was victimized: while it's true that Harry should not have been so disrespectful of a teacher, why do both of them feel the need for his apologies, while Severus gets away with a reluctant 'sorry'?
roxanne black chapter 7 . 12/7/2014
I really Love this fanfic! Are you still carrying on with it?
Sophie chapter 3 . 10/29/2014
Jrowk Ling - Love it. Rock on fellow Potterheads!
Sophie chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
WOW! LOVE IT!
lilyflower101 chapter 7 . 6/4/2014
love it so far! more please! :)
kittyranma chapter 7 . 5/25/2014
I've been enjoying this series and I can hardly wait for the rest.
ToastandOut chapter 3 . 5/22/2014
Love this, update soon?
Mistress DragonFlame chapter 7 . 5/3/2014
Interesting story; though highly awkward when Snap hugged Harry.

I guess it's not "TBC" since it was last updated in 2010.
XxXxSketcherxXxX chapter 3 . 1/27/2014
i like what you did wigth the book artist Jrowk Ling as ya know J.K. Rowling
Katie Who chapter 7 . 1/11/2014
Okay, so this story is really awesome! :) You have an amazing writing style and I totally love the plot. :) It's nice to read how Snape does try to change a bit so he can get to Harry. I really enjoy reading and I hope that you'll upload a new chapter some day because your story is absolutely worth reading and waiting, too. ;)

All the best. :)
1sunfun chapter 7 . 10/29/2013
Nice.
rowenasheir chapter 7 . 9/21/2013
TBC se gat
Belle-Cuddy chapter 7 . 8/16/2013
You can do it guys !
jeanette9a chapter 7 . 6/23/2013
i wonder how much of an impact this is gonna make?
Christine Jay chapter 7 . 4/15/2013
Oh wow!
This story is just too good for words! Everything about this story is just plain amazing. Out of curiosity, will you be updating this story soon? It's just a little sad leaving it hanging like this that's all. ;

Anyway
Like I said, really good story! Wishing you luck in all your works
ChristineJay
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