Reviews for Neville Longbottom and the Harry Potter
TheFlowerOfTheCourt chapter 7 . 2/23
I find it too unbelievable that 'Neville' can remember unimportant facts from the book, such as the Baron's love tragedy with Helena, but he can't even remember some of the most important information from a book he literally just read minutes before appearing in this world and that being the location of the Horcruxes. It's almost Deus Ex Machina with how he magically can't remember certain stuff that is super important but he can remember some of the most tedious information that's utterly useless.
Limetrix chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
very nice
saashi samy chapter 30 . 12/17/2016
Luna is so cute!
saashi samy chapter 22 . 12/15/2016
very funny

i like this chapter
saashi samy chapter 11 . 12/15/2016
very funny
MrKeyFox chapter 74 . 11/3/2016
I really hate the dense trope, so fucking over used.
Shinoki chapter 27 . 6/20/2016
Professor Sinistra is surprisingly cute. Aah, she's so like a little animal...
Rein chapter 73 . 5/27/2016
Poor oblivious Neville. Can't he see that Elena fancies him? I honestly can't guess who Neville will end up with. There's Ginny with the anime accidental kisses and the changing rooms, Hermione being the bestfriend, Elena the tsundere vampire, Cho with the broom moment plus being a teasingly flirt but competent secretary, and Hannah the loyal shy cute but dedicated council member now president. I vote for Hannah! She's unwaveringly loyal to Neville, pretty and kind too!
Guest chapter 83 . 5/12/2016
God dammit Neville! I was actually looking forward to you suceeding! Why am i even surprised?

I dont mind it becoming more anime like at all xD a harry potter anime wpuld be sp epic
Redery chapter 82 . 5/12/2016
Why is Neville going from ovepowered to completely useless. He basically just watched thpse two deal with the plant. Liked it better when he was stronger.
Redery chapter 81 . 5/12/2016
Ouch Neville I feel your pain!
Draco being so good kinda ticks me off too xD
Redery chapter 80 . 5/12/2016
Your portrayal of Hannah is awesome!
Redery chapter 86 . 5/12/2016
This was a great story. Though sad you didn't continue writing I understand and am glad you at least left the synopsis. Would've loved to read those scenes in detail. They sound just as a epic and hilarious as most of this has been so far. Maybe you could consider doing one shots of some of them. Would like to see dumbledores funeral for one lol.

And ha! Millicent who was actually a beauty all along! That's hilarious!
Redery chapter 85 . 5/12/2016
I honestly expected Neville to be called as the third and Fox put his name in or something. Or Draco if not. But Ron?

Dammit Neville just keep your shields up and you'd have the best chance out of everyone!
Redery chapter 84 . 5/12/2016
I almost choked on water reading this! That was hilarious! Poor Neville
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