This is an amazing story. It is a breath of fresh air among hundreds of similar plots. Well written and maintaining curiosity throughout the story with a nice flow. 10/10

Wow this story is legit

Sounds promising

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Was kinda decent up until loosing his memories. That part made 0 sense whatsoever. Ah yes the TRAINED ASSASSIN is going to freeze up cause oh no a teacher is pointing a wand at them. Mind you he had a forewarning he was coming to. Then to top it off he seems to have lost the incorrect memories too. Made no sense has no explanation and ruined the plot. Oh and better yet his memories aren't even gone. Just SEALED behind magic THAT HE KNOWS IS THERE. you fumbled the bag so fucking hard it's not even funny. Let's not forget that he sprinkled dreams sand on himself which did nothing at all. and before someone says it helped him deny dreams plans. No it didn't he did that without the sand. Now being stories should you know maybe perhaps MAKE THE MEMORY CHARM DO NOTHING. but oh well we can't have a decent plot around here.

That was an intense ride and I really thought it was well done. Thank you for writing it!

A bit boring and not my cup of tea for a story. Too hard to keep track of what's happening, let alone get to the weird part.

Looks like Harry is a killer of some sort. Did he kill the Dursleys and then flee to Paris to avoid being found out? If he's unstable it would be a fair bet to think he killed those around him and the Dursleys aren't easy to live with.
I find Harry's different magic in this interesting, can't wait to see where it's going. The Endless seem like they're gods and everyone else is their toy on the playground lol, and even the best of witches/wizards/humans(?) are only messengers at most or can talk to the Endless but are never on their level.

I'm kind of confused. I don't know if this story is meant to be confusing and we the readers are supposed to piece together the parts of it as best as we could.

My guesses are someone trained Harry to be some sort of assassin or killer, so he grew up differently. But in a muggle way. I don't know who they are. Harry also seems to have some sense of the Endless but the ins and outs of his sense with them haven't been explored. I'm a bit curious how Harry's upbringing deviated from the Dursleys, but yet I can still imagine him going to Hogwarts and fitting into the old plot for now.

Ah, so that's what the D-names were in the last chapter. I didn't catch on they were parallels of Death. I usually just see 3 of them in most fanfics so the seven flesh out the deeper feelings people have around dying and life I think. Their names made me think of emotions I don't usually think about and I liked the lens they put this event in, as well as the characters. I like the twist with Lily desiring Harry to live so much she managed to interfere with death. It expands upon canon in a perfect way. It was a bit confusing keeping track of who was speaking and thinking what, I don't know if it's just me or not. Good start, I'm really curious about how the story's going to get weird. Can't wait to read on.

A beautiful, amazing crossover! I first read this years ago, way before I had heard of the Sandman stories and didn't appreciate it as much. Re-reading your fic has given me new appreciation for the source materials. I really enjoyed the manifestations of the Endless and how you've written them for Harry's story. I'm looking forward to reading your other works.

awesome story!keep up the good work!

Holy shit this is one of the best stories I've EVER read... absolutely unreal...thank you so much xxx

I was honestly hoping that when Harry was asked to step into the room to make a choice he'd simply say 'as master of death I choose too die' meaning he wouldn't have to go into the room as he choose to die early.

Incredibly slow, lacking in plot. If the Endless want something, would have been good to include them a bit more.