|Reviews for Bet Your Life?|
| LilyRosetheDreamer chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Whoo! About time!
| dannyxzxzxzxxxxxxxxx chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
"Which stank unpleasently of Lynx and teenage hormones"
Keep them coming!
| ricreaper chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Danny Deathshead? Wow. Such an imaginitive surname, hehe Awsome story though!
| xXBWFXx chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Now, I don't normally read Beano fanfics, but this was actually really good.
| dannyxzxzxxxxx chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
you don't own AN iPod!
Neither do I. Welcome to the club!
| Blanky chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
Ooh, I loved this!:D I love this whole love/hate relationship between Danny and Toots. Do you have any more Beano fics?
| Cip chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
oh God I lovedt! That's exactly what they'd all be like as teens, it was spot on :D (and we all KNOW toots and danny are ment for each other!)
| fledge chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
At last I get round to reviewing this little gem. Even if I am not very familiar with the charcters, I absolutely LOVE this story. And the end is the perfect anti-climax, too. Wonderful characterisation of those guys and their insecurities. Seems to be the girls again who make things happen.
"stank unpleasantly of Lynx and teenage hormones" is in itself a jewel.
| mintbanana chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
y'know, that was the first fanfiction that i've really enjoyed reading in a long while. Personally, I loved the humour and the idea was great. Also, I liked the way you portrayed the characters.
All in all, I loved it. Really made me laugh too, you had some great lines in there. Good job.
| ultranaff chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
So I was just going to applaud you on writing one of my most favorite fanfictions ever, but I think I owe you more than that- something more constructive and useful, so I reread the fanfiction several times and here are my thoughts
1.) Theres definately a lack of description in the narrative but I personally love how you did that. Focusing in on the dialogue of only two characters and their own little world was a brilliant way to really enhance the subtle-ness of Dannys emotions
2.) The dialogue had a really good rhythm to it, '...taking some sort of ad out on the yellow pages' hahaha. Love Danny here, Toots was great too but she got a little too bitchy for my taste. Ah well, thats your idea of her, sassy sexy while I'm seeing her as a shy and emotionally inhibited girl.
3.) The ending was a lovely way to tie the entire idea together, I dont know why you hate it. Maybe cus its too simple? but simple endings are always the best
All in all, I'd give it a 5 star rating. Written very well. I agree with the above reviewer, why don't you write more? Im tossing my head around a new Beano story and I'm wondering if you want to chat about it? Email me if you're interested
| Werepuppy Black chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Hah! Fantastic! The ending is brilliant. I like how you set up the relationship between Toots and Danny - dating-but-not-really-dating-its-actually-a-really-close-friendship sort of thing. It works well with those two characters. I also like the way you portrayed the relationship between Dennis and Minnie - it was wonderfully in character for the two.
And now I'm wondering, is there a a flip side to this story? Dennis and Minne's bet about Danny and Toots?
You really should write more Beano fics, you are good at it.