I think the only thing wrong about this story is the fact that Edward and the rest of the Cullens would be willing to forgive Tanya for attacking one of their own. Edward should have and would have killed the slut.

YES JACOB IS DEAD FINNALLY!

HE'S DEAD! MWAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHA!

~ B

I love the storyline xD

did u have 2 go in detail about the whole sex scence rofl cakes it was ttly great y'd did it stop and 4 once i read da authors note lol

interesting story. I hope you continue it.

I LIKED IT.

MIKE IS SUCH AN ASS. I'M SORRY BUT I REALLY HAVE NEVER LIKED HIM. I LOVED YOUR STORY THOUGH.

This has been a very good story.

Hey Londa,

I think your story is great.

To be honest, I read chapters 1, 2 and 3 and I was willing to leave until I read that Jacob and Tanya were in Denali, in Edward's home. How convenient lol.

Your creativity made me want to read more, but I'm reviewing right now because I should go out and I can't read the whole thing until I come back. Keep up your good job, one of the bests I've seen on FanFiction.

The best for you and your stories,

David

super strenght lol rofl so funny!

update soon, mi amigos!

this was realy good! i can't wait for the next chapter :)

i wish jacob were back it sucks w/o him n now i h8 edward!

person wit huge lips i think is ooc (tanya)