|Reviews for Armored Heart|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2
You need to indent everytime u start a new line of dialogue. U can read plenty of stories here to find examples of dialogue.
| Jennie Smith chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
This was really good. I loved the words u used. However, maybe a few bits were a little cliched and grammar a little floored in parts? Still, good on the whole.
| Rendezvous Haver chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Seriously?What's this have to do with Jekyll and Hyde? I mean it's kinda interesting but It'd be easier to relate to if i knew what the heck it's from.
| katie chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
what does this have to do with J&H?