|Reviews for Heartache|
| Wishes and Words and Etcetera chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Amazing. I've never read another HM fic written any better.
I love it to pieces :)
| Mai-chan chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
I absolutely LOVE this! GrayxMary is so cute, especially here! I love the way you write about Mary's emotions. Your style is very good, nevermore199-sama (I can call you that, right?), and I couldn't find a single thing to critique at all. I hope you write more in the future! _
| The Scarlet Sky chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I've already told you how I feel about this, but I L-O-V-E your style, as always. Very flowy, very lovely to read. I also like the unique aspect of Mary coming to terms with her problems, and relying on Gray as a friend. (though, future development into romance may or may not have been implied :D) Also, Mary trying to be happy for Jack is so IC, it's heart-melting.
Anyway. Still love it. :D
| Pixiebby chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
I liked this :)
It was a little sad... Poor Mary...
Heartache is so hard...