|Reviews for Under A Dark Star|
| Tsamoka chapter 196 . 1/8
Did you know that some of these chapters are re-posts?
| Peanut Gallery chapter 196 . 6/17/2013
A Great and Massive Work. My only complaint is its size, I don't normally read anything over 50 chapters, if not for for a rainy week off work i would not have read your work.
A series would attract more readers, 196 chapters is intimidating.
Thanks For a Great Read,
| APhantasm chapter 195 . 4/20/2013
It's been a good read. Hope you update again soon.
| APhantasm chapter 172 . 4/18/2013
Chapter 171 and 172 are the same chapter.
| APhantasm chapter 152 . 4/18/2013
Another Duplicated chapter (151 and 152)
| APhantasm chapter 141 . 4/18/2013
Duplicate Chapters (140 and 141)
| APhantasm chapter 72 . 4/17/2013
Ok that explains the two Dawns. Maybe I should stop reviewing till I am done with the story, so that I don't ask things that you turn around and answer later..
| APhantasm chapter 71 . 4/17/2013
Posted the same chapter twice. Check Chapter 70 it is the same as Chapter 71.
| APhantasm chapter 70 . 4/17/2013
Noticed on the previous chapter after I posted the review not only did you have Dawn back at the SGC. But then later you had her back on Themyscira. Basically it was like she was in two places at once.
| APhantasm chapter 69 . 4/17/2013
You made a small mistake in this chapter. In the last chapter you had Dawn on Themyscira with Buffy, Faith, Catherine and the rest of the group. This chapter she is mysteriously back at the SGC.
How did she get back?
| APhantasm chapter 9 . 4/17/2013
Ignore my previous review as you kinda answered it in this chapter. Looks like your story is set after the end of the series. Which explains Dawn's being left behind. She's probably in college.
Though stuff with Faith doesn't quite line up with the series. But it's your story so it doesn't have to.
| APhantasm chapter 7 . 4/17/2013
I have one question so far.
You finally mention Dawn. Okay so what season does this take place in. I was thinking season 4 till you mentioned Dawn. But since Dawn didn't arrive till season 5, what season does this take place in. Cause if Joyce is dead. Leaving Dawn, who's a minor at home, could get Buffy in serious trouble with Child Protective Services.
| Thaliran chapter 160 . 3/2/2013
Where is part 174? you went straight from 173 to 175
| kahless21 chapter 195 . 2/20/2013
keep up the good work, only work faster. lol
| Addlcove chapter 5 . 11/9/2012
it's an interesting idea but I am confused as to the timelines, if this takes place in season 9-10 of stargate then where is ernest? and if it takes place in season 1 as indicated by your disclaimer why is landry and Vala at the SGC?