Reviews for Breaking Point
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Awesome story!
Hella3009 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Would very much like to read the next chapter of this story. Please carry on.
Archiving-Jason chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
I love this story! The bortherly-ness is so immense! Thank you!
csimesser1 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
that was great loved it
Bunny1 chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Tatsumaki-sama chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
What a terrific retelling of that episode. So many great Charlie and Don moments all wrapped up in just one scene. I really loved the way you gave the brothers all these emotions and brought them to life through this story. Great job.
zookitty chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
I LOVE this story, so well done! It's terrific! -swoons-

Well written and very in character! Thank you for this

Whispering Darkness chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Yay for overprotective older brothers! -
dustie-snark chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
I love it. :)

More interaction, please!

wolfeylady chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
I love these little family moments! I will read any more that you write!
TonyDiNozzo4KateTodd chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
i love it! you should keep going!
masondixon chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Very nice job fleshing out this small part of the episode that meant so much to so many of the viewers. It really is only the fanfiction writers who know how to add the detail and depth to parts of the show that either time or plot or just shallow observation prevent us from seeing on the screen. Very good job here.
newgal chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
I absolutely love this. The line about Colby's army mentality and Don doing Charlie's shooting was on time. I love the way you went into the emotions esp that Charlie not telling Don about being followed would cause Don's feelings to be hurt.
klutzysunshine chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Great story. That was one of my favorite scenes of all four seasons, so I'm glad you touched upon that. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
qnhi chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
aww this is so cute.

i love protective don