Reviews for Drowning On Dry Land
Buddy5647 chapter 3 . 7/2/2015
Yeah, that's real good, I told you the last page would pick up the tear jerkiness
Buddy5647 chapter 2 . 7/2/2015
A little more tear jerkiness, the hospital scene when he won't talk to her or see her or anything ought to jerk some tears, and the last act should get us all. I'm just guessin
Buddy5647 chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
It took the whole page, but you jerked tears, at least from McGee. Great title, by the way. Titles can be overlooked or often under thought.
NCIS fan McGee chapter 2 . 3/8/2015
yeah ! CELEBRATE !

OHHHHH YEAH! i getting a head of myself ...she isnt gonna die NOW is she ?
NCIS fan McGee chapter 3 . 12/17/2014
its nice to see tim understand its not always his fault. He is my fave character and i never want to see him get in MIT grad has a long way to go in the 'real world' and must learn that he doesn't always have is much like LJG in that respect but will always be our McNerdy. Who is socially awkward and whose life mirrorrs mine exept for the fact im an 11 year old girl who enjoys proggramming computers and writing stories and fanfic.
puppypants chapter 3 . 3/3/2013
Good McGiva
mnbvcxdrtyuik chapter 3 . 10/23/2011
McDirty... nice touch!
lucyferr chapter 3 . 12/31/2009
Thanks for writing this!
NCISgirl1527 chapter 3 . 5/11/2009
It was a really good story and i have to give you cerdit because you made McGiva beleiveable almost. (Sorry, tiva and McAbby all the way)
Hailey Ambrose chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
i really liked this story. i love that you show how bad McGee feels about not being able to hold on to Ziva. i also like that you show that no one blames him. especially Ziva. i love that she is only one who can get through to him about the guilt he feels. it is written very well. keep it up
KaD chapter 3 . 8/17/2008
That was a freakin' awesome story. It was believable and still something that wouldn't happen everyday in the show. Thatnk for brightening my day!
dark-angels-who-eat-cookies chapter 3 . 8/5/2008
Hee, I'm like the trading post. I love happy endings!

This was perfect! Oh, I love it! Onto my favourites list! NOW! Yay

Love Dawec
KellyRoxton chapter 3 . 8/4/2008
Great Job it was wonderful. I love how Ziva let him have it to get his attention. Also Tony letting them borrow his car.

Hope to read more.
jojocat chapter 3 . 8/4/2008
Adorable. A nice way to begin the day!
jimmy-barnes-13 chapter 3 . 8/4/2008
That was a happy ending, it was great. I liked Tony's note too lol :)
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