Reviews for Shadows of Another Life
brittany08forever chapter 20 . 3/25/2010
pls do a sequel
AngJones chapter 20 . 3/8/2010
Good Story
Siriusmunchkin chapter 20 . 3/3/2010
Nice ending.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 19 . 3/3/2010
Jake dying the way he did wasn't a good thing. At least none of them can hurt Bella, Edward, and Carly anymore.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 18 . 3/3/2010
Jasper would be in almost as much pain as Edward. Bella is his twin.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 17 . 3/3/2010
The photo shoot was interesting. The Billy/Jacob thing is just something to get through to reach the ending. Might not be bad stuff, just doesn't interest me any.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 16 . 3/3/2010
Stress could certainly do that to a pregnant woman. Am a little surprised Jake got off so easily. He at least should have been made to go to therapy for anger management. He's still in denial and ready to blame everyone else but himself for what he did to Bella. And Bella is way too forgiving about some things. She leaves herself wide open for the next time he decides to ruin her life. And he will try and do it again. Your little twists are another reason I don't read stories until they're complete. I'd lose interest in the parts of the story I liked waiting for the author to get to the point.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 15 . 3/3/2010
Knew about the house, didn't think of a saddle. Wonder if Alice and Jasper, and Rose and Emmett are expecting their first children yet? Your Jake deserves whatever the law hands him. Maybe seeing Bella very happily married and pregnant will be punishment enough for him. Charlie has a girlfriend. It's about time.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 14 . 3/3/2010
Very romantic. Emmett's and Charlie's timing is perfect as always. And glad Billy didn't try and make any of what Jake did out to be Bella's fault. At least he recognized she didn't love him the same way. Jake will probably have to live silently with his guilt for the rest of his life. Though it wouldn't surprise me if because of his injuries he tried to find a way to end his life. A house somewhere on the Cullen land for Bella and Edward? No idea what she would get him. Unless it was a grand piano to go into the house.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 13 . 3/3/2010
Sister's are like that. Hawaii beaches are wonderful and a wedding at sunset would be perfect. The vows were inspired. The dance with Bella, Jasper, and Charlie was another perfect moment, especially with the Rascal Flats song. The family hug was touching and so was Charlie's speech. The wedding night was very nice.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 12 . 3/3/2010
That was very good. Something snapped inside Jake when he realized Bella didn't love him as much as he loved her. It became a twisted obsession to get her back. He lost all touch with reality. Didn't really believe Bella didn't love him. Decided it was all Edward's fault. Bella stopped loving him long before she met Edward. Your Jake deserves whatever is coming to him.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 11 . 3/3/2010
Knew you'd come up with something to break up the happy day. That's okay. And Jake's policeman friend won't be a policeman much longer. The police don't take kindly to one of their own conspiring with a kidnapper. Having a dad like Charlie is always a good thing.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 10 . 3/3/2010
Very nice. Like the idea of a sunset beach wedding. Nothing wrong with twins getting married the same time. Just wondering if Jake will show up and try to ruin everything. Again.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 9 . 3/3/2010
The toasts were great. Loved the way Edward put the ring on her finger before he proposed. Nice way to celebrate and engagement.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 8 . 3/3/2010
That was very good. At least Jake didn't get a chance to do any further damage. Though making her fall into a mirror isn't exactly good. Charlie is finally on the right page. That's a good thing.
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