|Reviews for Distraction|
| me chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
| toster chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
this story took long to read but it was worth it
| XJhoker chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I do love seeing
Mellow yellow as the Uke one!~ He is so damn cute!
And you didn't make Oc at all! we don't even know Matt's personality~ xD
But Mello's was good
PD: My english sucks xD
| ComatoseKarma chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
You deserve more reviews than you go! It was on of the most descriptive lemons I've ever read, which is rare to find these days. I dunno why... I liked the long length of the story and the switch of who was seme and uke. Loved it
| biawutnow chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
That was...amazing D Wonderful job.
| YPrincess chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Me luv! Seriously!
OOC? I didnt see much OOC. And I bet it was a betch to write too. Its long, like whoa.
And ur lemons are very disriptive! I can write a lemon if my life depended on it.
| gigilexi017 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
awesome! It was long but I loved the cute Mello XDD hehehe
And that you gave both of them chances to be seme, and the playful teasing :)
Nice poem that inspired you to write this, it adds depth to the story and sums it up pretty well :D
Good job on it!
| Alice Melan chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
I liked this.
| Lady Shikyo chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
This is the longest lemon I have ever seen. How long is it anyway? You did a great job, and playing with Matt's need for cigarettes was a good idea.
| XXXdaniXXXsharpXXX chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
loved it! I really did, I wish I had the guts to put a lemon up...but...ugh, mine suck so bad! this one was amazing, and they were not really all that OOC really...Matt reminds me of my sister. two hours without a cig and she is ripping heads off. lol.
your style is very interesting too, i was not bored at all! i like the way you did the flashback too, did not make me want to stop reading like most flashbacks do. overall, amazing you are my young padawan...(dorkness...creeping..in...)
| Demon Hiei's Girl chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Huh? OOCness? I didn't see much of that! Trust me, there are fics with way worse characterizations. And by the way, lovely lemons! It's hard to find a decent read with good sex scenes these days! haha And MxM is such a beautiful pairing, and this fic further showed how cute it's capable of being. I loved it! Great job!