Reviews for Distraction
me chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
very nice
toster chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
this story took long to read but it was worth it
XJhoker chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Wow, lovely~

I do love seeing

Mellow yellow as the Uke one!~ He is so damn cute!

And you didn't make Oc at all! we don't even know Matt's personality~ xD

But Mello's was good



continue writing**

Take care~

PD: My english sucks xD
ComatoseKarma chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
You deserve more reviews than you go! It was on of the most descriptive lemons I've ever read, which is rare to find these days. I dunno why... I liked the long length of the story and the switch of who was seme and uke. Loved it
biawutnow chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
That was...amazing D Wonderful job.
YPrincess chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Me luv! Seriously!

OOC? I didnt see much OOC. And I bet it was a betch to write too. Its long, like whoa.

And ur lemons are very disriptive! I can write a lemon if my life depended on it.

gigilexi017 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
awesome! It was long but I loved the cute Mello XDD hehehe

And that you gave both of them chances to be seme, and the playful teasing :)

Nice poem that inspired you to write this, it adds depth to the story and sums it up pretty well :D

Good job on it!
Alice Melan chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
I liked this.
Lady Shikyo chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
This is the longest lemon I have ever seen. How long is it anyway? You did a great job, and playing with Matt's need for cigarettes was a good idea.
XXXdaniXXXsharpXXX chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
loved it! I really did, I wish I had the guts to put a lemon up...but...ugh, mine suck so bad! this one was amazing, and they were not really all that OOC really...Matt reminds me of my sister. two hours without a cig and she is ripping heads off. lol.

your style is very interesting too, i was not bored at all! i like the way you did the flashback too, did not make me want to stop reading like most flashbacks do. overall, amazing you are my young padawan...(

Demon Hiei's Girl chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Huh? OOCness? I didn't see much of that! Trust me, there are fics with way worse characterizations. And by the way, lovely lemons! It's hard to find a decent read with good sex scenes these days! haha And MxM is such a beautiful pairing, and this fic further showed how cute it's capable of being. I loved it! Great job!