|Reviews for The Beach House|
| The Diamond Princess chapter 1 . 3/1
i love this!
| MindGeek chapter 26 . 2/19
Yeah, the ending was abit rushed but I won't burn the story or anything. What I will do is request a sequel though, if you haven't already written one. There were still some things that needed a better resulotion, such as the Tara situation or maybe Raven finding out that Kori told Gar about Malchior even. Other than that, it was another very excellent read. My favorite parts was probably the characters interactions... which was most of the story, I know. But I just really enjoyed how each character would uniquely interact with the others.
| great chapter 26 . 2/16
I needed a long fanfic. Thanks purpleflame!
| Just Smile D chapter 26 . 1/28
O.M.G. I loved this story! You're such an amazing writer!
| BBxRAEshipper chapter 26 . 1/25
SORRY THAT LAST REVIEW WHERE IT HAD SAYIN U SHOULD'VE DESCRIBE A BIT BETTER LIKE WITH WHO TONI
AND BUMBLE BE SHOULD BE WITH CYBORG AND THERE SHOULD BE NUMBAH TWO WAS ME (LOL I FORGOT TO ADD THE NAME)
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/25
God i love this story so much i read it twice
Becuz the first time i read it was last year and i didn't understand as much.
But i really get it now and it felt like i missed some of it when i first of it.
I love how u make it so serious but cute and the way BB wink at her is adorable.
Oh but i really think u should of added more describing with the minor character, like who was Toni?
Oh i wish u had paired Bumble Bee and Cyborg!
Oh yes i wish u'd added more in the end that would be PERFECT but i still think this story WAS PERFECT
U SHOULD MAKE ANOTHER Y'KNOW LIKE AFTER!
| redrazztazz chapter 26 . 1/10
Yep I re-read it...again. And I still love it!
| redrazztazz chapter 1 . 1/9
I read this story a few months ago, and now I'm having the urge to read it again. So here I am re-reading it. But hey this does me you've got one hell of a story!
| Kaarlinaa chapter 26 . 12/19/2013
Omfg I love this freakish story the best ong you had me on tears I can't believe it ended best story I ever read! Bravo ! Bravo ! I loved it !
| leahtheocean chapter 11 . 11/18/2013
I came back to say that this was my favorite chapter.
The part when the police officer came and Kori thought she was dead, I cracked up LOL
But the convo, or should I say, argument between her and Raven was really nice. how you layed out both of their perspectives was interesting too.
I just loved how pushy Garfield is and I greatly enjoyed he story :)
| IcePrinc chapter 26 . 8/12/2013
Not as good as your other works, I don't really like alternative universes and Raven felt too depressing, too distant. And I would personally name Malchior Mel Chiore or something like that. But still good.
| Guest chapter 26 . 8/6/2013
it was beautiful
| Soul chapter 26 . 8/6/2013
Well what can I say you do it again
| KroovyRed chapter 26 . 7/16/2013
Out of all your fics, I would have to say this was the roughest. Not in terms of structure, but in terms of Raven being the rag doll so to speak. Getting beaten up Tara, getting hit by a car, getting raped by Malchior! Yeesh!
| Eliptical chapter 26 . 7/15/2013
Oh gosh I loved this story ;-; it was too perfect and the ending was great u