Reviews for Cameron's Relocation
Luke777 chapter 10 . 1/11/2014
This was a really alienating story. So strange and surreal. Especially the fact that the world order has collapsed into such a desolate state just because of Ellison's announcements seems a little bit extreme. While I do believe that there would have been some kind of outrage and hatred towards Connor, I still believe most people would still have tried to preserve their comfortable and convenient day to day life.

But your story was also very strong! It had a very dark atmosphere, strong emotions and very original ideas.

It was also quite impressive how your narration was so completely unlinear and out of chronology. Quite a challange for the reader, but also very interesting!
RCAM chapter 10 . 6/2/2011
This was a really good trilogy, intellectually challenging in parts, with good action, and some nice romance. My only complaint is that John behaves uncharachteristically and unrealistically cruel throughout much of the stories. I felt like his character wasn't captured very well. But on the whole, this was a good, interesting piece of writing. Nicely done.
PSG1JOHN chapter 10 . 12/22/2010
strange AU john being a gangsters, but was fun to read
JustJoe chapter 10 . 12/18/2010
Great series. Just want to echo all other positive comments.
Vintorez chapter 9 . 10/18/2010
The madness like a virus has consumed him.

Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.
Vintorez chapter 8 . 10/18/2010
Their enemy is quite clever. Great ending.

Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.
Vintorez chapter 7 . 10/18/2010
It’s all driving him insane.

Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.
Vintorez chapter 6 . 10/18/2010
Good to see them both together.

Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.
Vintorez chapter 5 . 10/18/2010
She really means everything to him.

Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.
Vintorez chapter 4 . 10/18/2010
Things have changed.

Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.
Vintorez chapter 3 . 10/18/2010
What will the search cost John?

Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.
Vintorez chapter 2 . 10/18/2010
Driven to madness by his despair!

Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.
Vintorez chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Great new story.

Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.
Lariun chapter 10 . 8/3/2010
"catch you fuckers at a bad time?" priceless.

Loved the whole series. Dark, light heart tearing and nicely done.

On the down side, page breaks or something to illustrate transitions between scenes would have been helpfull. But on the whole one of my favorites so far.
echo27fire chapter 10 . 7/28/2010
Very dark story. It was good, but I definitely did not enjoy it as much as the other two.
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