Reviews for For Your Birthday
silverbirch chapter 4 . 11/18/2008
It was an excellent last line, to what has been a lovely story.

well done.
silverbirch chapter 3 . 11/8/2008
Well, at least she's now talking about it. The start was so funny. Lavender's right, of course; Hermione is just a bookworm with no experience of boys which is what makes this whole thing so good.

You've set the final chapter up perfectly. I think I know what's going to happen, but you've left all the options open.
silverbirch chapter 2 . 11/8/2008
Oh no, cringe making! (In a lovely way, of course.)

Like a lot of brilliant ideas, this one is so simple! Ron deciding a dance would be a good present is so sweet, but you just know it's going to go wrong. I'm not sure which one to feel sorry for the most.

The characters are well written, too. hermione's touch of paranoia, Harry thinking its a great wind up. Rone being lost.

You've created a very good story.
Spicysweetchica101 chapter 3 . 11/7/2008
HURRY! I can't wait until the big day!
Spicysweetchica101 chapter 2 . 10/24/2008
oh! cannot wait to see what happens!
silverbirch chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
I like this. Of course, she never had a birthday at home, and I thought that was really sad.