|Reviews for Beyond the Looking Glass|
| razzledazzle96 chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
ha, that was cute. jasper reminded me of edward for a moment. he's a pretty cool character when you think about it.
| MPants chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Wonderful piece. I love Alice and Jasper and I think you do a great job of showing Jazz's insecurities, and Alice's complete unconcern. Their love is palpable.
| ahizelm chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Excellent, my dear. :) I love when people make Jasper more than a reclusive vampire. I loved the insight in this piece. Nice work. :)
| geekissuper chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
oh i do love jasper/alice! and the whole jasper vulnerability was done well. oh and the fluff. i do adore fluff
| nonoenonoenoen chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
holy cow! this was probably one of the best ive read.. and I certainly loved the fluff/ do you have any more alice jasper stories? are you going to write more..because i LOVED this :D
| yourmamasface chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
Wow. If I wasn't a vampire and could biologically produce tears, then I would have. (okay that was lame, but you get the idea)
| Chosy chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
just added the story to my favourites. ;) (very first time i do that)
i love it! :)
| Voldemort Perfumes chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
I don't know why I thought that was funny. But i loved it!
| wirbil chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
This is a great! I totally love how you talk about Jasper hating his scars. It's totally awesome.
| bookworm75 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
I liked Jasper's vulnerability here. Great story!
| CellarDoor717 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Wow, I really loved that. It was so sweet, and you wrote Jasper's character very well, same with Alice.
This is really good writing.
| runaway xo chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Before I say anything, let me embarrass myself by saying,
I'm insanley curious upon why you thought you needed help writing fluff, when you so obviously don't! And Jasper's POV too... jeez,
I think I'm going to bow down to you. That was great! The characters were in character and the vocabulary, once again, was amazing.
"We were very, very late for school that morning."
I laughed. Loud. :)
| Hanneli chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
*claps enthusiastically* That was great! Just what I was in the mood for! :D
| getmesomenasonexyouswine chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Ohh... how CUTE! [If only I could figure out how to italicize in a review... xD] I think this is completely and utterly adorable. I'm such a sucker for fluff. Hehe. But honestly, this is so adorable. You got Alice and Jasper completely in character, even with Jasper being a completely different can of worms than the easily portrayed Bella or Emmett. Really amazing job. Honestly, I can't find a thing wrong with it. Perfect grammar, spelling, and punctuation. I'm flabbergasted. Keep writing great fluffy fics!
| ValSilph chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
I love this story! It's cute and funny. Jasper and Alice are two of my favorite characters and you portrayed them perfectly :)