Reviews for Five Romances of Miss Spencer
Burninghammer63088 chapter 5 . 6/14/2009
Ah... A sweet chapter, A cool ending.

Not a bad story mate. Lanquage barrier aside. I enjoyed the plots. Not a bad try my friend. thanks for posting.

Dan F
Burninghammer63088 chapter 4 . 6/14/2009
heh heh I think that's my fave chapter yet. *grins* Not bad man not bad. I look forward to the final chapter.

Dan F
Burninghammer63088 chapter 3 . 6/14/2009
heh heh that was a quite a funny chapter. Your ideas are great. I look forward to the next.

Dan F
Burninghammer63088 chapter 2 . 6/14/2009
Again mate. Good story. Nice idea...but i Found it hard to read. Not to bad.

Dan F
Burninghammer63088 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Not a bad idea mate, But I agree with the other review in that it would probably be a good idea to get someone to proof read it for you. I did like the idea though. Nearly there mate. I'll read the next chapter.
VizKitty chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
I think English probably isn't your first language. This story is improperly written and hard to read. For instance, "Aisha blink a few times and realization hitting her like tons of brinks" - this is incorrect in a few places. This makes for choppy reading. You should get a beta reader.