Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
This was a reasonably nice piece full of good reason :p
ilyenamylove chapter 3 . 8/21/2012
I love this. It's heartbreaking, but I love it.
TragedyBunny chapter 7 . 2/21/2009
The simplicity here is the key, it's poetic, and manages to say a lot. But of course it's zutara so it's all crack. LOLZ i kiddz
NaruSasuNaruLover chapter 5 . 8/6/2008
these are all very good though I must say day 3 was sad :(
hducudusjfjei643 chapter 3 . 8/3/2008
A man, you could have at least given a warning that it wasn't happy : (
Lady Vion chapter 2 . 8/3/2008
love it! Im not usually a fa n of first person narratives but this is turning out nicely! can't wait to read more :)