Reviews for Wounded
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 45 . 7/8
That was really good! The story was amazing! Throughout the thing, you wrote consistently, which is good, and had a great plot line. Some chapters were short, but they were really good anyway and the characters were very interesting though they sported a little OOC-ness, but it made it a better story altogether because of it. Great job! I will look at your other stories in time but I have a feeling they will all be good. Nicely done! And it pains me that the story is over, but every good story must come to an end.
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 44 . 7/8
What the heck happened? So, it turns out that Kankuro got into a car wreck and he had a dream of them dying?! My gosh! I was so confused that I had to go do something else so I could think it over and then figure it out without reading because that would have confused me further if I kept reading. Well, great job!
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 43 . 7/8
That was so sad! Why did you have to do that?! They, they... I am unable to form words that explain how mad and terribly upset I am at you killing them. Sorry! That was really good but it's sooooooooooooooooo sad they DIED! I'm trying so hard to hold back the tears but it's just too sad. *sigh* good job with the chapter.
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 42 . 7/8
That was soooooooo cute and amazing! A couple errors but it was fine because they finally have a baby! Yay! Oh I loved this chapter, great job!
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 41 . 7/8
Ah, poor Gaara with his nightmares. But well done with the chapter, can't wait to read more.
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 40 . 7/8
That's good that it ended pretty well. Great job with the chapter!
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 39 . 7/8
Wow, I really hope Gaara can handle her being pregnant, and I have no idea who is going to die, though I don't want to find out but I must because the story is really good and I can't stop reading it... Nicely done!
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 38 . 7/8
That was sweet, they would be such a cute couple! I hope Gaara and Sakura work out their tiny issues about her teasing him, I mean, I would only do that if I had similar dreams that steadily grew worse until the previous ones felt like good dreams. I'm rambling, anyway, that was really good! Nicely done!
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 37 . 7/8
Nice, that was interesting for sure. :)
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 36 . 7/7
The ending was cute. Nicely done!
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 35 . 7/7
That was pretty good, a couple errors, but it was interesting to read. Nicely done.
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 34 . 7/6
Oh I can't wait to see how they repair the place! I love things like this, and am writing something very similar in my story, so I will love reading this. Nicely done!
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 33 . 7/6
I noticed you tend to write 'asked .' or whatever without giving an actual name. Don't think you mean to do that so I'm bringing it up. But the chapter was really good! Keep up the good work.
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 32 . 7/6
Good for them! :D
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 31 . 7/6
Yay for being a freshman! Nicely done!
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