Reviews for Betrayal
furioustype chapter 6 . 1/17/2014
Oh god. another chapter pls! nakakabitin
Guest chapter 6 . 3/16/2013
NOO! were the next chap!? Plz plz plz continue!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/16/2013
Guest chapter 3 . 3/16/2013
Haha no ur story Isnt crappy a little short but it's really good(:
GsweetyP chapter 6 . 9/24/2011
This is really nice, it's getting better

On with the next chapter!
OfSunsetsandCarcrashes chapter 6 . 1/5/2011
How is it that both Setsuna and Kotaro were able to get controlled as easily as that? Or, rather, why would they pretend? And why is Konoka going out to try to stop Setsuna? How's she going to do it? I'm curious to find out how this story ends. It's really great, I'm enjoying this a lot. I liik forward to the next chapter. :)
LoneWolfx03 chapter 6 . 11/21/2009
T_T... you didn't finish your story...hope you will update it.
mayo chocolate-chan chapter 6 . 6/27/2009
where's the ending?

tell me if you already upload it..thanx a lot...
KAPM chapter 6 . 6/23/2009
PLease continue
Lance58 chapter 6 . 5/31/2009
nice i like how setsuna transforms... i hope you continue and make another konsetsu fanfic with konoka jelouse lol anyway good job!
BatterieszX chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
I like your stories very much and this has got to be in my top ten favourites...but seriously..update soon.
PureWiings chapter 5 . 3/22/2009
ahas awesome chapter!

nu dont be a bad guy setsuna (& kotaro) DX


cant wait for the next chapter!~ .
Demon Cat08 chapter 7 . 3/13/2009

Hope you can update this soon

I'm getting really excited
Shikize chapter 7 . 10/22/2008
Nice like always
Aeon Snowbreeze chapter 5 . 10/16/2008
"Kaede gave him a hug, then threw him away." hahahhaha ohmygod I laughed like crazy at this, even though it was a serious situation, that line was so funny xD haha good job good job!
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