|Reviews for Fudomine vs Shintenhouji, DDR Showdown|
| karrot bear chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
kamio fits ddr...kenya too
| WintersTears chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
A DDR showdonw.. nice one XDD you should do one on an Eating Contest XDD other than that nice story..2 bad it was a bit short XDD
| chibiz97 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
lol Kenya nd Kamio are soo cute in this fic!
| Peridot Tears chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
xD Wow, they are getting so heated lol.
Ah, poor Zaizen, beaten by Miyuki xD
| Midnightxwolfx chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
XD Zaizen and Kenya! I love em, so cute!
| autumn-leaf16 chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Well, it is good to see you back (I hope you had a fun time in China!)
Well, now...for the actual story. First of all, your conversation is done very well- they seem like actual sentences that the characters themself would say, I feel that the description is a bit short. i think your description of the surroundings should increase a bit .there should be more description, because right now dialogues make up for the majority of the story. But having said that, it might just be me- that I have a preference for dialogues. So it's okay if you don't agree with my opinion at all.
But I did enjoy reading this story, it made me have a good laugh due to the end, espeically due to the prospect of what might happen to Kenya and Kamio when they get back.
| LoliBat chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
lol good job!