|Reviews for Your Retention Please|
| BrightStar Kenobi chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
More please this was good
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
More enjoyable than the standard retelling with a few details changed most authors do.
| GeorgeTobor chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
There are other fics where Willow keeps something but not many and I can't think of the titles right now. There is one where the gang dresses as people from Slayers and they all keep the new abilities.
And all the gang has character issues. Buffy, Willow, Xander, Giles, all of them.
I like Willow best.
| CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
A great story. Very good.
| Nightgazer333 chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Hey this is cool really! More please now! I like it and hope you will write more but if not that's ok too.
| PiotrMc chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
I love it you are a great writer and i so agree with you until season 3 i think my favs were Xander willow then giles but after willow go well a more retarded charicter it went Xander then Giles but now i am not sure they are both my fav so what i am trying to say it i hope you go threw season 8 you know the comics lol
| CryingTearsOfBlood chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
| Waith Shadow chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Nice, I love the Saving Private Ryan addition, I like you have I high view of Xander and a low view of Willow after season 2 and Love Saving Private Ryan lets see were you take it.
| WBH21C chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Very well done! Love to see how this changes things.
| Bobboky chapter 1 . 8/2/2008