Reviews for Clipped Wings
Cryptographic DeLurk chapter 1 . 2/17
I read this a long time ago, and it's nice to see it's still as good as I recall~ I really appreciate the complexity you've managed to retain in their relationship, with Gwen trying to be dutiful, and being hateful and upset and confused by Oswald and the spell she's meant to be under, while Oswald neither indulges the violence she invites on herself, nor fully understands why she does it or what her concerns are. They're sweet on each other in spite of themselves~ And I love the dreamy quality to the tone here, it feels very fairy tale.

Thank you so much for writing!
l3largus chapter 1 . 2/25/2016
Hnnng! Right in the feels. I like your info on the wings and marriage for the valkeries.

Keep on keepin on.
l3largus
p.s. Here's a muffin.
AquaticSilver chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
I love it!
Thanks for this.
Nalahime chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
Great! Is all Im going to say.
WrenWeir chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
The wings drew me to the game in the first place , bittersweet story there, so glad Oswald would not clip her wings.
EminaRukiax chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
this is soooooooo awesome! great story! two thumbs up! :D
Leia1 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I loved this the first time I read and I always thought you wrote them both so perfectly then I was watching some youtube scenes from Odin Sphere so I decided to come back and tell you!
anonymous chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
That's an interesting idea for married valkyrie. I never thought too much into the marriage, but I really like this idea. I'm so glad that Oswald didn't clip her wings, although I never imagined he would. Thanks for writting, I really like this fic and hope to read more from you.
Jamimlia chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Awesome!

I love this to death. Keep it up! ;)
Helena Heartbeat chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Oh, man... Maybe I woke up too early or maybe I'm just a sap, but I'm tearing up a little. This is beautiful. :]
Mariagoner chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Oh, so gorgeous done! The characters are so beautifully portrayed and Gwendolyn's dilemma rents my heart a little. Such a terrific story for such a small fandom!
Snow White Griffin chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
This is such a sweet story. You have a good command of language and the story itself has a poetic and smooth flow added to it.

However, I don't think they'll...do it before Gwendolyn confesses her true feelings for Oswald ;P
IGAF-kun chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Beautiful one-shot. Too bad there aren't more Odin Sphere stories like this one.

Keep up the good work.
Turb0-mugen chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Well... I always thought of Gwen as a ''normal'' girl since in the artbook they seem to be attached to the armor, not to her. (And we don't ever get to see both naked so... *sigh* )

However it's a nice touch in order to express her own fustration about how her life turned to be at the end.

Also, you and a lot of people think that yeah, they've already had sex before the Armagedon plot, well... I think all of you have a point there since Gwen's plot ended the way it ended and Vanillaware didn't show us more or at least give us a hint...

The only thing that made me feel a little sad, was her feelings for him, she was doing her best and he knew it, but still...

A great one if I haven't told you yet ñ_nU
Sharnee Brookee chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Aw :) Love it, Love it, Love it!

What a great idea 3
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