Reviews for Ordinary Day
Cole chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Dude, plain hilarious! But . . . why is he nude?
Besieged Infection chapter 1 . 4/26/2010

You are a very misleading person...

Great job. I like how you trained us to think in one direction by giving us hints into their love lives, only to end things by bringing the reality into the mix.
Keuraki-SoraXRiku chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
OMG, that was such a twist XD LOL. Maybe i'm a tad bit of a pervert. Heh. Serves me right, i guess XP

Well, love it, enjoyed it, and laughed.



rawrmuffin chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
ahh. so misleading x_x

good story though :D

damn. we're all such pervs arent we? xD
Naruta13 chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
lmao hahha so unexpected i seriously thought that it was that Sora was bad at topping Riku xDD
QueenTheirin24 chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Throughout the whole story, I was wondering "sucks at what? WHAT ARE THEY TALKING ABOUT?"... and it was a video game...






Moonshine 369 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Alright… you’re kidding.

That is so not funny. Not cool, no, no, not at all… xD Wow. How perfectly… Near.

I really didn’t see that coming. xD

Alright, so lessee. Now you’ve stolen not only my KH fic virginity but also my RikuSora fic virginity. Keep it up and I won’t be able to call myself a prude (bull) anymore. Wah!

Anyway, I always think it’s really funny whenever KH characters are playing KH. Clever xD

I’m curious what was so wrong with this one that you had to rewrite it. I think you’re too skeptical of your old works.

Ah, well… not that you’d ever let me read them. Regardless, I really like how this one came out. You set the mood and then… bah.

You pulled a “Near.”


P.S. Yes, your name is now a noun. Bask in your own glory (but briefly, I want to bask in it some too).
withbothhands chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
asldkfj! that was great. i was totally expecting erectile dysfunction, but i guess that's why there's a twist :).

ahaha i have no idea what else to say. other than OH MY GAWD I LUH YOU.

and sora-massages. yum.
Innocent KH chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
Lol! Jokez! JokeZ! hahahahah! :D

U got me there all right. I knew there was a twist and that it wasnt wat we were supposed to think, but playing a game? A GAME? Lol.

When Riku got up, actually, it crossed my mind that maybe..just mabye it was-...erm...really random but am hungry lol- cooking? Hahahha!

But..God this was written so passionatly! I felt the lurve all right! Hehehe! :D

Gosh, this was amazingly hilarious! I was like "ha!" when Riku out of nowhere said the twist of the fic. It was unexpected and slotted in so beautifully, u wont even spot it muc if u were reading fast and not paying attention. Hehe :D

Yarouka chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Oh. My. Gawd... YOU TOTALLY HAD ME THERE! I was like, "Ooh Sora can't get it up! AAHHAHA!" But it was just a video game? Great humor. Truly hilarious! XD

I was laughing at how sad the thought of Sora being, er, /incompetant/ was... LOLZ!

Good job! This was friggen hilarious.

Oh, and I loved the part when Sora said he bit it in frustration! I was like 0_0;
phillly24 chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
AWESOME LOL u had me goin dere omg i was thinkin sumthin way different lol keep up da gud work :)
Chro Mephisto chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
OMG its done so well. You think its going one way but then it goes and changes on you. Really well done. You have great skill.
Tenshi chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Wowzers...when you said "the object that Riku had put in his hand" I was thinking...Dildo?

I was NOT expecting that ending -XD- HILARIOUS! I loved it!
taru taru animegal chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
*cannot stop laughing* AHH! this was hilarious!XD I read like 2 paragraphs and went "WTF! isn't this T for Teen!" So I went to the bottom and read "...and we'll defreat the boss!" XD LMAO! Poor Sora can't win at his own game!XD

I loved it!
Cassie-san chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
XD I was like, halfway into reading this,

"This is... rated T, right...?" XD

That was hysterical.

I had to double take at the genre after reading a few paragraphs in. XD

You did a splendid job. :3

I loved it.
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