Reviews for The Break Down
ValFish chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Aw, this was so sad, but well-written.
five letter word chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Beautiful. Especially describing the scene when she first saw him dead. You are one of my new favorites! Thank you for helping procrastinate on my own story and my schoolwork. I'm not being sarcastic :)
The-Herbasaur chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Wow, that was great. It had me crying the whole time. You are an excellent writer. I'm really very sorry about your friend. But this was a great representation of your feelings.
magically speaking chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
love it