|Reviews for Call a duty 4 episode 1|
| Chris7221 chapter 6 . 2/7/2011
An HL2/Call of Duty crossover could work and even be interesting. It's not a bad idea.
Unfortunately, the writing is just awful. If you were trying to be the next Peter Chimera, maybe it could work. As a serious story, just no. It's awkward to read, each chapter is too short (but feels too long) and makes very little sense. The characters seem totally wrong and the odd half-script format makes me want to tear my hair out.
Good idea, terrible, terrible execution.
| new chapter chapter 6 . 7/8/2010
nice story. whens next chapter
| OronKira chapter 3 . 3/5/2009
a bit of an odd AU but a nice piece of writing all the same.
| Rob chapter 3 . 11/23/2008
Um, just sayying Cardiff is in Wales, not England.
| abstow89 chapter 5 . 9/18/2008
Wow, this is weird.
It's like Call of Duty with Chicken Little and Killzone.
| Monails chapter 2 . 9/15/2008
you know its almost like story mode which i beat several times before i got xbox live which i got addicted to COD4 and soon became number 7,142 in the world...and i guess it kind of proves that i REALLY needed a life when i got grounded for being proud of entry into the top 500 in the world...oh well that game is and always will be the best i have ever played...lord let number 5 be great and 6 even better
P.S: i know what your thinking...blutty brit!...no im english...english american :P go america brits suck!
| InhumanNexus chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Nice story, kinda odd though, but great. Keep up the good work!
| Explodusthegreat chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
nice job me!