Reviews for My Universe
Lobisomem chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
So hot and so lovely... TNX SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!
vampiresrock.twilight chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
She freakinn stops aging at the age of 7 in human years but is mentally and physically 17 so if she was 8 she would still look seventeen because obviously she has stopped aging
kelsieeee chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
aww that last line was so sweet.

I loved this chapter.

I think you did a great job.

ChickThatHatesTwilight chapter 1 . 11/19/2008

So damn sweet!


write more like this :D
baysidebird88 chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
aw that was cute, you should continue on with this story
watermelonflavored chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
aww cute!
Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
ah that was so good I loved it very sweet to!
SarahCullen4 chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
aww :)
coven mistress chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
I love it. I really hope SM writes about Jake and Nessie's future together.

People who are asking if the 8 is a typo for 18 or why an 8 year old would have breasts need to read the book. That's the only way it will make sense.
LoraineSouza chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
aw but nessie as 8 yr old wouldnt have breast right?
InLoveWithEdward1218 chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
I loved it! I found it especially amusing how sick it would sound to anyone who hadn't read breaking dawn... him and an 8 year old... lol.
dazzled01218 chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
that was kinda awkward at first

cuz i still had Nessie as a baby in my mind

but i read it a couple more times

and i loved it

it was so sweet.

i have a new-found love for Jake.

Clairful chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
We took my time, though, slowly undressing each other.

I love that line, it's so typically male.
isacz chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
wow LOVE it! great job! :);):)
FoothillFalcon chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Just to clear some things up, when Nessie is eight, does that mean she is the equivalent of an eighteen year old? I know she's not like a normal human eight year old, just wondering about your opinion.
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