Reviews for Naruto: Eleven
Jean Danjou chapter 5 . 5/7
Okay. This chapter? Bad, really bad. Kumo reaction was an asspull, wthat reaked of plot device and contrivied reasons, and lazy writing. A Jinchuuriki is nuclear weapon, lots of problem, but you really don't give them around.

And the dialogue between Yugito and Sakura was S level cringeworthy. So OOC, it felt like Yugito was a microphone that you used as mouthpiece to say something that would advance the romance. Lazy. Expecting better.
Jean Danjou chapter 4 . 5/7
Interesting plot, Yugito has great potential as a character. You're developing he quite nicely, but I feel that the constant POV chamge doesn't suit you very well. You can't give much of a uniqueness to any of them.

And you really need a beta.
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 16 . 4/25
Oh man, Naruto's gotta deal with political crap now! Ah I thought there was going to be a kiss, but I worked myself up :(
Can't wait for an Update :)
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 15 . 4/25
CRAAAAAZY! Will Orochimaru Get To Use The Body?
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 14 . 4/25
AAAH! That Letter Really Got Me! My Emotions Are Going Haywire!
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 13 . 4/25
Good Chapter. That Ending Though :( My Heart!
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 12 . 4/25
Who the heck is the pet? Good Chapter.
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 11 . 4/25
OH CRAP! I THINK THAT JUST HAPPENED?
Great Chapter.
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 10 . 4/25
Damn, This Chapter Was Amazing.
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 9 . 4/25
Man these fights are exciting :)
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 8 . 4/25
Our Boy Naruto's Taking Care Of Business!
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 7 . 4/25
Aw Man, Everything's Going Down! Great Chapter
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 6 . 4/25
NOOOOOO! Listen to her Naruto! Great Chapter!
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 5 . 4/25
Pfft, Kumo, Not Wanting To Deal With This! Great Chapter!
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 4 . 4/25
Man, Poor Naruto :(
Pretty Funny How Yugito Just Dismissed Sakura Though :)
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