|Reviews for One Last Gasp|
| Mando-Vet chapter 25 . 12/23/2022
This is a strange story but a good one.
| wiebenor chapter 25 . 10/28/2022
Good book, but not the usual Harry Potter dimensional travel story either, as he's clueless to the fact that he actually went into a different dimension, all the way up until the last couple of chapters... I mean, don't get me wrong, there's confusion in Harry's life on a good day, but even this is amount of confusion is idiotic, to be perfectly honest, because the real Harry wouldn't be as thick as he's portrayed here, and yet somehow he is EXACTLY that thick, and what's worse, SOMEHOW Harry wakes up in the beginning of the story, to a wanted poster supposedly bearing his likeness which starts the whole mess, somehow...
THEN everyone just says, "he's new in town, he bad, must be" and shit goes down, then when he's confused, "throw him in St mungo's"... Again, not what I expected in a time or dimensional travel book
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2022
I think this Harry is like a jerk, and I can understand that everything is messed up, but he's really acting like a maniac all the time, and then somehow talking about everything to a therapist, and I don't think that's what Harry was like at the end of the sixth year. It's like Harry was in the fifth year
| Athrick chapter 14 . 7/2/2022
Well that’s literally the only way the trial could have gone since Harry is acting insane for some reason. He just won’t stfu and talk normally. He’s been acting insane since he got to this alternate reality so he’s already gone crazy.
| hijirokichi chapter 14 . 6/6/2022
The characters personality is so messy Sirius always tell stories of his family being evil and meeting serious mom still not rings a bell to him this Harry is more stupid that goyl...
| Olorin'6 chapter 25 . 5/13/2022
Well that went well
| aGnamZer0 chapter 25 . 12/16/2021
This story is absolutely awesome! You took it to incredible heights and I really hope you intend to continue it – your rewrites indicate so, but since you didn't finish them I'm not sure. Either way, I'd be grateful if you could tell me wether I can expect a next chapter or not.
Whether or not there's more though, I really want to thank you for writing and sharing this story with us. Thank you!
| aGnamZer0 chapter 24 . 12/16/2021
I didn't expect them to do so much for ONE muggleborn girl. I'm pleasantly surprised.
| aGnamZer0 chapter 23 . 12/16/2021
| aGnamZer0 chapter 22 . 12/16/2021
Everything is starting to fall into place it seems.
That being said, I admit I'm curious as to Regulus' reason to enter and stay – besides not being hunted by Tom I mean – a Death Eater. Does he truly believes the bullshit about blood purity, that the wixen with long lineages are magically stronger? Or is it about how muggles and muggleborns change and refuse the current traditions of the Wizarding World? But even then, it wouldn't justify those massacres. I'd very much like to know the inner working of Regulus' mind.
| aGnamZer0 chapter 21 . 12/16/2021
Looks like Regulus won this little race.
| aGnamZer0 chapter 20 . 12/16/2021
Now the big question is who will manage to get The Shadow first? Voldemort? Regulus? The New Order?
| aGnamZer0 chapter 19 . 12/16/2021
Will Regulus try to convince Rosier that Voldemort his mad what with him creating horcruxes and then trying to make a break-out plan for Harry?
| aGnamZer0 chapter 18 . 12/16/2021
Okay, so finally the information spread.
| aGnamZer0 chapter 17 . 12/16/2021
It does seem like Harry isn't very bright sometimes.