Reviews for Golden Slumber
Kyranol1 chapter 1 . 17h
I'm actually not a big fan of Twilight, in fact I may even go as far as saying I slightly dislike it.
I've read the books, and they were... Alright?
I would go into an explanation, but that may take a while, and I'd rather not rant right now.
Anyways, I think you did an awesome job keeping Bella and Alice in character, with Bella's awkwardness and insecurities as well as Alice's cool yet playful demeanor.
And somehow, you made what is normally (for me anyways) Bella's annoying self consciousness into a rather endearing trait when interacting with Alice.
So good job!
Kinda wish there was a sequel, but this is still awesome as a oneshot!
ziporah chapter 1 . 7/2
Interesting. nice Joe..I love Alice and Bella.-.:-)
LaverylK chapter 1 . 1/31
I just love fluff.
NeekahLordSkimmonsLove chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
brilliant
traparella chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
Aw, cute! Loved it
TinaF chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
Great story!
FireRebel chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
That's super cute. I loved the puns. Also I wish I could cuddle with Alice. That's is all. Great job!
HeavenBesideYou13 chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
This was poetic. And beautiful in so many ways. Loved it.
riskeybusiness chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
Cuuuuuute
Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
awh, man i dig this couple.
FabPezBerry78 chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
cute and beautiful :)
LauraPiercy1999 chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
wow this is great will you be updating this anytime soon?
GiveMeJustAMinute chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
This was really sweet! And very well written. :D I definitely enjoyed this, my only complaint was that it ended. ;) thanks for writing this!
rulanpooh16 chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
I really like this story, it was perfect to me and 'Bi-scentual' had me rolling.. D
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
I seriously love this. I'm about to start the sequel.
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