Reviews for Burnt Water
PeaceHeather chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Hi there.

I have a REAL PROBLEM (tm) with this story.

You didn't finish it. :)

For some reason I dont think I've seen quite this set up for a Zutara fic before, and I really like it. Please consider coming back to it some day.

Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Wow, can't wait for the next one. I'm gonna go read it now. I got to see some real Zutara! Zuko has got to get his act together and kiss her already!
Panda Slippers chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Yay!The story continues!
I'm a Blank Sheet chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Mashed Potatoes '
sweet-impact chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
“ But I’ll still catch you.”

Her heart stopped.

“ I still want to be the one who does that.”


ohmygah these lines just got to me. Also in your other oneshot. Gah, I'm such a sucker for lines like these
Lyoness of Avalon chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Zutara tension! Toph has her work cut out for her.

I feel bad for Mai though. She's not that bad.
Anise Nalci chapter 1 . 11/27/2008

Sappy endings are always win!
Random Little Remus Lover chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
hehe loved it!

water...haha no

possom chicken

Gabzilla chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Claen Up Brigade! XD

This one was as sweet as the previous one. I like how you included Mai in the Gaang. :3
Wohitzi chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Ooh, interesting continuation. I loved the beginning - so cute and funny. xD

Scheming!Toph is bound to be interesting...
Liooness chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
that was great and again, can't wait to see what happens
katdemon1895 chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
love it, i'm torn between actually liking mai and not liking her, it was much easier when she still served azula and i love how you write toph, you have her down perfectly, actually i think you've really got all the characters spot on, well done with that and i look forward to more of whatever you choose to write
azherd chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
byakugansharinganweaponhottie chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
i love your installments i hope you update soon. hmm she should be making sea prunes.
razzledazzle41191 chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Not a Zutara person, but I still liked this story. The conversation on Appa had me laughing pretty hard, I love all of their chemistry.

And for the food...either something really odd like pickled pigs feet or something that doesn't require any cooking at all, like instant pudding. Because they totally have both of those in the world of Avatar.
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