Reviews for Somthing is not right
special.sneezes chapter 4 . 9/29/2009
o cliffy i like it keep writing! and bring edward in soon
Bella-18-Swan chapter 4 . 9/15/2009
Haha very funny!
Siera-Cullen chapter 4 . 1/8/2009
DANG IT!GRR STUPID LIGHTNING YOU BETTER NOT KILL BELLA!you can kill mike BUT NOT BELLA!
Siera-Cullen chapter 3 . 1/8/2009
good chapter but it could be better sorry if thats mean or anything im just saying that you should edit it more so there arent any mistakes because i notice a lot of them
RL rl Real chapter 4 . 1/2/2009
ok, i've reviewed - i love it! - now post the next chapter!
neverthink4 chapter 4 . 1/2/2009
omgomgomg

Ahahahah WHATS GONNA HAPPEN! AHAHA

i feel like a kid in a candy shop on a sunday morning. I CANT WAIT

btw your . thought id let yu know lol.:)
Melanie chapter 4 . 1/2/2009
this is a really good story. please keep writing!
gaby47 chapter 4 . 1/2/2009
ill just say it one time UPDATE SOON!1 AW WHATS WITHE THE WHOLE LIGHTNING THING?''? UPDATE! LOL btw is edward going to appear to save the day or somethig?¿ lol
Lady Saruman chapter 3 . 12/5/2008
“Oh, Bella.” The nasally voice yelled. I would know that voice anywhere. It was the voice that sent young children running in terror, stopped beating hearts, and made boys our age jump off bridges."

Hahaha, that quote made me laugh hysterically. I was like LMAO LMAO jump off bridges hahahaha

Anyway, rosalie hates bella already? Not good :P
eeyoreisemo chapter 3 . 12/3/2008
good start!
Siera-Cullen chapter 2 . 10/30/2008
it was one of the cullens wasnt it?ya it was wasnt it?o my gosh this is is a GREAT story!

v&
Lady Saruman chapter 2 . 10/29/2008
SABOTAGE MUCH!

Oh Lauren..always up to no good. Seriously. She and Jacob big fat NO. Just divorce her, Jacob. :(

Update soon :D
Siera-Cullen chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
CONTINUE!i LOVES YOURS WRITINGS!
bmw72792 chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
good story, bella as acheerleader..different, :D
All.The.Pretty.Corpses chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
i think you should totally continue, in fact, i think you should update now!

LOVE IT!
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