Reviews for Deep Cover
Vargast91 chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
And that is why you never send a ignored and abused child to be a spy for you. He'll usually turn on you.
simple chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Yes.

Just.

Yes.
Arvarno chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Well, this sure is a new take on it.

Though Orochimaru seems way too nice. And this should make Naruto into the prime target for a body switch, as well.
Kyoki no Kage chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
oh wow...

this... just... wow...

im at a loss for words...
mysterysuperman chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Freaking awesome story thx ;)
Kyukon chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
This is... ingenious.
Scorosin chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
killing you with umbrella's did you mean the old saying that when a man wears to faces he soon begins which one is real? any way great one shot i could have seen this as a multi chapter however very well done
xNamikazeKyuubix chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Yay more NaruTayu! Interesting way to weave this oneshot though I have to say you made Orochimaru way less evil than he was in canon. He actually cares for his subordinates in this fanfic, and I also enjoyed the NaruTayu fluff. Well so Konoha burns in the background as they walk away...AWESOME! Always thought the village was crap with the way they treated Naruto.
tokusei04 chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Awesome, I loved the twist you put on the story. Dispite not being an ending that is seen often, or perhaps even popular, I liked it.
Eclipse1234 chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
By far, THE most amazing one shot short story ever. Of course, this can easily be expanded into a full out story...
Genericrandom chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
I've read this like, three or four times now. While a story like this might be interesting to read as a 100k word epic, I think the outline format works best for it. It's interesting and engaging, poignant and moving and evokes lots of warm and fuzzy feelings. Great job.
Might gai chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
These stories are great and from ur writing I see u revell in the spring of youth!
Plus-44 chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
that was really really good!
Useful76 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
I liked it a lot. It provides a good comparison between right and wrong; good vs evil. Just because he was born in Konoha does not mean its his home. A very tough decision indeed. Betray the only people who he has called friends and the girl he loves for people that generally could care less about his existence or betray the Hokage that was kind to him for a little bit of his life. It was a very nice story.
Lord Blood chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
very heart-warming. the entire time through, i kept thinking, "omg is naruto gonna actually betray sound?" turns out, no he wasn't. so i thought instead that you should make a companion fic to this one where he stays loyal to konoha and see the outcome of that.
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