|Reviews for Deep Cover|
| Dark-Syaoran chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Kinda cool. Seemed a little easy on how he got in and how everyone readily accepted a person like Naruto, but it was still an enjoyable read.
I was waiting for a little bit of guilt towards the end, aimed not at Konoha but at Sandaime Hokage, but it never came. I felt it should of been touched upon, being the only person to ever trust and like Naruto beforehand.
Well done, anyway.
| Techpriest of Tzeentch chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
absolutely amazing. Besides from a few words out of place, the story was well done. Beautiful plot too
| DarkDesh chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
amazing story you have here keep up the good writing.
| PHAZONFUELEDKID chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Very, very nice. Your spelling and grammar is great, and the story isn't overly complicated. It's short and sweet, and it fits this one rather well. Perhaps we can expect more NaruTayu...? I'll give you a cookie if you say yes!
My favorite part was probably when you talk about how he made good friends with the other Sound Nins, and even Orochimaru.
| Uncle Joe chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
damm good stuff
| BrazeRancor chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Best Pairing ever Best Author ever Best story ever!
| Vasuki chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
hmm... what's the word... oh yeah.
A nice little short story, I could totally see Naruto screaming about ninja farming. The one thing I felt was missing was something from the Sandaime's perspective when he realizes he's been boned.
| MRBee chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Man i love NaruTayu. I know its a major crack pairing but people make this couple work so well. its personally my second fav. NaruHina being the first (always the best couple, never gonna change)
But DANG! Naruto betrayed Konoha?
well im not mad, actually im a bit relieved 'cuz now he's with Tayuya.
But i am sad that it was only one chapter, i wish this could have been an epic length fic. Try doing a sequal to it. That would be BOMB!
| Hiei's Cute Girl chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Aw, how cute!
I certanly liked it. At first he was a spy, but soon, that act turned into reality as he really went in deep with the people he was supposed to be fooling. It was stupid of him to do so, when you really think about it, but he's just a kid, so we forgive him. And anyway, Naruto learned a lot under the tutilage of Orochimaru.
| Son of the morning chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
That was an unbelievably good one-shot. When i had read the description in my e-mail, i had assumed it was a more then one chapter story, but now i see that more chapters would have ruined it. Amazing job.
| Forever Rahhel chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Finally a good Naruto with a mask fic.
The romance was chaste which is good, since most are too thick.
Keep it up.
| grey mage chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
wow. that was awesome.
now could you please write another, longer story to accompany this one where naruto does not betray the leaf?
| liteonit chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
I liked the idea of Naruto being deceptive and used to infiltrate sound. It was well thought of and I enjoyed it a lot, nice work.
| Fl4mingTurd chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Ok first I want to point out that I have read a lot of storys where naruto betraying Konoha and siding with Orochimaru. I didn't like any of them. NONE! Until now that is. Very nice story.
| Hakkyou no Yami chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
.God that was awesome man, it a really great story I loved it.