Reviews for Washed Away
fullhans1 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Good story.
Daniel chapter 3 . 10/29/2011
This was very good, and I'm currently pondering over whether or not the thing I'm thinking about wil happen the the 4th chapter. I'mma have to read on to find out! Very interesting story though.
Sharpclaws chapter 5 . 11/20/2010
a wonderful story
Ainmosni chapter 5 . 11/11/2007
Excellent story. You have captured Krillin and 18 perfectly, and the sexual tension between them is well written; it leads up to chapter four perfectly. And you did a good job with the lemoney aspects too. It was more than sex that you wrote about, and it was necissary. So many people dodge that aspect of Krillin and 18's relationship (or write it like dirty word porn), when actually it is a natural step in a relationship. Anyway, good job.

However, your illustration link doesn't work, and I'm interested in seeing your view of this story in another medium. If you could just reply with the correct link that would be great.

Also, I would be honored if you read some of my work...I'm a Krillin and 18 fan and I have a few fics (mostly oneshots and poems, but one big story).

If you don't have time or don't want to, I completly understand.

Great job once again.

-Ainmosni-
spriterx chapter 3 . 2/9/2007
Awsome story i loved it :)
otakuspirit chapter 5 . 11/16/2006
how verry nice! god i love it! more more more!
Frankokomando chapter 5 . 7/29/2006
chapter 4 was hot _
Fina Arvanthol chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
An incredible story! You are clearly talented. I thought you portrayed Krillin and Eighteen's characters impeccably. Aside from a few typos, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Very good.
Krillin285 chapter 5 . 7/6/2004
The whole fic was good. I liked how 17 act's throughout the fic and in the wedding scene. Very good.-Lip aka Josh aka Kril
Larissa chapter 5 . 2/4/2004
Great fic. Hope there will b a sequel.
Broli the Destroyah chapter 5 . 12/16/2003
I like this, especially what you did with the Z Warriors and all. If this were in Pojo's Unofficial, I'd give it 7 stars (Pojo ranks by Dragon Balls).
dingrick chapter 5 . 6/28/2003
Nevermind about were i could find your story.

I found it -_-() Love it!
Darth Sinister chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
I think you did an awsome job with this story. It would make sense if this story actually did happen. Tell me if you have any other stories, reguardless of what topic they are.
aka143 chapter 5 . 4/21/2003
Hey great fic I checked out the pics and they are awesome! where in the world did you lean to draw like that?
Moonprincess202 chapter 5 . 4/13/2003
This was so cool! I've never been much of an Eighteen fan but this story was awesome!
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