Reviews for Spiral Illusion
Fyreyes chapter 3 . 2/16/2009
Great story! I'm excited for the rest! I am curious about one minor thing though. You said that Ino, Shikamaru, and Choji had Maito Gai as a Sensei right? So if by Asuma's team do you mean Ten-Ten, Neji, and Lee? Or was that a typo and you meant to say that Ino, Shikamaru, and Choji's sensei was Asuma? Just curious.
davethedark chapter 3 . 2/16/2009
update soon
Doom Marine 54 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Seriously your making Naruto out to be some sort of spoiled brat, even if he was quick to anger in the series he wouldn't attack Sasugay because of some off-handed comment. You seem to be pointing out how superior Sasugay and Sakura are than him, even though Sakura is the most pathetic of the team. Also whenever you open chapters you tell how Sakura and Sasugay are moving along nicely but for Naruto you portray him as some lazy goof-off. Also, out of all the sensei Naruto was the most respectful to Kurenai and Asuma. Kurenai was never in ANBU, at the begining of the series she was premoted to jounin. Sarutobi's name is not Sasugay.
Doom Marine 54 chapter 3 . 2/16/2009
So what with the Naruto bashing?
geetac chapter 3 . 2/16/2009
I like this chapter.
Elemental Dragon Swordman chapter 3 . 2/16/2009
great chapter
Please Read my stuff chapter 2 . 2/3/2009
Lord Blood chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
team seven, suddenly named team one, with kurenai? i can understand naruto being put with kurenai, since sarutobi wants naruto to be a genjutsu specialist, but there wasn't any real need to put the other 2 with her too...

not to mention, there's quite a number of other plotholes here. like how sarutobi knows about madara. there are others, but i'm not in the mood to go back and nitpick 'em all.
goldenboy892007 chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
hm verry good so far keep up the good work and update asap
spiritwolf35 chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Im not sure what to say at first I thought this was going to be a good story but I am sorry to say it but you screwed that up from the way you made the teams why I say that is because well Susgay will not benefit being on Kurenais team since she isnt a combat person Sakura would benefit from her teaching and I can see why the Third Hokage whose name is Hiruzen Sarutobi and it is not Sasuke Sarutobi and if you dont believe it then go look at the site called anyways I think the story would have been better if Naruto would have replaced either Kiba or Shino but no you changed team 8 with team 7 and team 8 became team 1 and now here is a question what will happen if Sasgay awakens the Sharingan who will teach him Kurenai cant so I am sorry but this just in my opinion and my opinion only the story wont be any good sorry
Dismal chapter 2 . 1/8/2009
Sorry my review is annonymous, I forgot my password, any future reviews should be through my account.

You have me interested, though nothing is awesome about the fic so far, but I'll definitely continue reading.

I'd definitely suggest going with a NaruKure pairing, there isn't enough of them, and after all love has no age bounduries.

Also, I really like fics in which Naruto uses genjutsu, but they always seem to slowly become abandoned, I hope I don't see the same with your's.
Kwisatz Haderach chapter 2 . 1/5/2009
You're off to a good start, though you tend to make Naruto even more childish than he is in canon.
WayDrifter chapter 2 . 1/4/2009
hehe Please hurry up with next chapter
Meatzman2 chapter 2 . 1/3/2009
cbf to read this fic nemore naruto is just too stupid for me to handle...
spedclass chapter 2 . 1/3/2009
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
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