Reviews for Spiral Illusion
The Dark Knight of Gotham chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
egamtaerg chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
if gai is gonna teach hinata shino and kiba. whos teaching lee neji and tenten?
Leonhart20 chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Great start but the Sharingan can see through Illusions so give him a bloodline that rivals the Sharingan that can copy Genjutsu as well as jutsu tai nin ken etc and can even trick the Sharingan or something to that effect you could also use it as a reason that Naruto sucks at genjutsu at first anyway keep up the good work
Black Volcarona chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
badboywest chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
intresting but have anko drop by narutos training ever now and again. hell she could do some teaseing / light flirting towards the blond haired shinobi.
Jedi-Trixster chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
good story so far keep it up
pudgypudge chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
A good start. I'll watch to see where this goes.
S.A9 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
sounds great
neversleeps17 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Nice story, but can't the Sharingan see through all illusions?
NoMercyOfDeath chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
hm its going to be fun to read this cant wait to continue reading it
spedclass chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
scman87 chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
This stories opening was great! I always enjoy stories that take a different direction from the cannon. I'm looking forward to how Naruto will be turned into an illusion specialist and his relationship with kurenai.
sharknight6939 chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
great chapter
Lloyd Neruameshi chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
update soon
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