Reviews for Incomprehensible Desire
eelojnil chapter 33 . 1/16
While not the typical HEA DWP MirAndy everybody knows and loves, it was totally engrossing and captivating and I was compelled to read from the moment I started.

I love how you fleshed out Miranda and Andy and added Aquarius into the mix. I was drawn into each character's interactions and moments of reflection. I found myself laughing, crying or agreement with or contrast to that which they were experiencing. I have never been so emotionally involved in a story before.

This is truly an amazing story and one of the best DWP I have read.

Msboom13 chapter 23 . 1/1
I liked it in the beginning but the story lost its spark the more Aquarius became a main character. She kinda feels forced upon their relationship.
in-the-sometime chapter 17 . 9/1/2017
I know this story is unfinished, but I'm a bit of a masochist and I'm enjoying the hell out of this, so I'm going to keep reading it.
lulu2613 chapter 25 . 9/10/2016
I wonder who she fought with
lulu2613 chapter 10 . 9/10/2016
Please tell me aquarious will be around for a while!
Estrelinhas chapter 33 . 10/6/2015
Came across this story today and couldn't stop reading. It's one of the best ones I've read. I wish you had written more. Thank you for sharing your writing with us all.
Shadhyi chapter 26 . 8/2/2015
I know it's late, but I just stumbled upon this fic. Don't even know if it's complete, but am reading. Nice fic. Very different from all MirAndy fics. But can Aquarius disappear already? She has just become too much of a main character.
user97130 chapter 33 . 7/18/2015
Thank you for the story. It wasn't a comfortable read, because it touched too close to home, but then, reading doesn't always have to be a happy experience. The axe for the frozen sea inside of us, or something like that.

I hope that this is not enough for you and you eventually feel the need to write again.

Until then :)
Guest chapter 33 . 3/26/2015
Urgh, this was so good. A unique view on the two main characters and a great original character. I can't believe I read over 25 chapters before I realized it wasn't complete. Well all I can say is if you ever choose to finish this off or extend it, I will be reading. I can't predict the outcome. Any thing might happen. Kudos.
Guest chapter 12 . 1/5/2015
Loved this until the whole Aquarius thing. The character seems crammed into this story and totally unnecessary. You had great flow with Miranda and Andy and then it just kind of faltered. I'm going to keep gunning through and see if you pulled it back together.
fantasyinmymind chapter 33 . 9/9/2013
I'm not sure what to say. I don't normally read the angst stories, but I started and couldn't stop. Will you come back and finish it? Please.
AnonBliss chapter 33 . 8/29/2013
One of the best Mirandy fanfiction out there ... left me with bittersweet feelings but as the story kept going, i could not imagine the typical fluffly happy end coming (which i'd love of course but then sth would not feel that good)...Though i doubt that they could actually be friends after all those things that happened between them.
Miranda would not change her life for anyone ( except her children of course) and i loved that you kept her in character.
Totally loved that you portray each character with a depth-not black and white,not good or bad...I mean, most of readers out there expect Andy to be the sweet innocent naive girl especially because she is cute and young and Miranda to be the bitch in the people are not like that - they can be both.
Congrats !
Auhndreya chapter 15 . 8/27/2013
I'm half way through and omg this is so freaking cute I can't wait to finish it but I couldn't just not comment so :P
Guest chapter 33 . 8/23/2013
sybil13 chapter 33 . 6/29/2013
Harsher reality was needed for this series to continue and you have achieved it.
I particularly appreciate the confines of Miranda limitations and the jaded youth of Andy, it worked perfectly. What's next?
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