|Reviews for Great Minds Think Alike|
| Guest chapter 13 . 10/5/2014
Love this story UPDATE!
| underdressedandovereducated chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
update! love this story
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/20/2014
| TheBrokenHeartedLamb chapter 13 . 2/19/2013
I have been reading your story and I love it. Tombstone is one of my favorite movies, and who does not love Doc Holliday? I hope Charlie and Doc get back together, considering I thought Doc was being a little judgemental of her knowing all the horrible things he has done. He should have asked her if it was the truth, because of his judging attitude she fell into the arms of Ringo. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
| Baxley chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
You have the makings of a really cute story but it is quite obvious when you were writing it you were caught up in the emotion and fell short of being a proper story teller. You also must take in consideration the time period. First of all, the men would not be standing around waiting for her to wake up. Since she was a female it was up to the women to care for him. Yes, they would be concerned and would look in on her on occasion but would not have hovered over her. Second, there would not be a bathroom inside a building. They had an outhouse or a privy behind the buildings. When she wanted to get cleaned up they would have either brought up a sitting bathtub and filled it with hot water, or she would have used a wash stand that held a pitcher filled with water and bowl. Thirdly, you need to be more descriptive about your characters.
For example, you wrote - Doc's eyes widened as he saw the woman asleep on the couch. His heart was beating a hundred and ten miles an hour. He immediately changed his expression to his normal one hoping that no one noticed it. He knew she was there, but he still couldn't control his feelings. He liked her. A lot. That's why he paid his visit -
What would have been better is to elaborate on Doc's feeling. Be more descriptive. You're telling a story and can be as elaborate as you want to be but you still want to hold the readers curiosity and weave the story.
For example: - Doc's eyes softened when he saw the young woman sleeping on the Earp's couch. The soft sunlight through the curtains touched her face softening her delicate features. Although she was pale her cheeks had a soft blush to them reminding him of the peaches from his home state. Realizing he was exposing more of his emotions then he had intended Doc scanned his friends hoping no one noticed and relieved that all eyes had been on the young woman. He was intrigued by her. So many questions filled his mind. Sitting on a couch opposite the one she was on he studied her. He already liked her and wanted to get to know her hoping she'd awaken soon so he would have that opportunity.
Keep writing. The more we write the better we get at it. All the best to you.
| Arreis chapter 13 . 3/26/2012
I adore this story! It was worth the wait; please keep writing ;)
| britt chapter 12 . 8/29/2011
please continue! I love your story!
| Stormy4ever chapter 12 . 6/4/2011
I don't mind at all! XD. (Just to let u know I changed my username from jasperlover to shinolover)
| willandjemlover chapter 11 . 3/16/2011
i really liked this story! you should keep writing! :D
| Stormy4ever chapter 11 . 9/29/2010
Wow! Great! I love doc so much!...r u going to put the ok coral fight in? It would be wonderful if u did!
| Winter Wish 7 chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Really enjoyed it! good story! Xxx
| pheobep3 chapter 11 . 7/25/2010
| Britt chapter 11 . 5/10/2010
KEEP IT COMING!
| BeatrixKiddo76 chapter 11 . 5/1/2010
First of all this is based on one of my all time fave movies so I like it already. Second, I LOVE stories about my cousin Doc so that's extra points. Third, great story all around. Keep up the good writing.
| Jess chapter 11 . 3/22/2010
Hi! your very welcome! wonderful job on this chapter! update soon! j