Reviews for Shadow of Memories: Revenge is sweet
James Birdsong chapter 10 . 8/27/2009
Very cool
FrozenFlare chapter 10 . 1/18/2009
LOL What an awesome ending haha time paradoxes are insane!

I'm so happy you did the full story _ I feel like there could be more in the middle areas, but I understand you were just trying to jot your idea down :P

Very nice fic :D Just some grammar issues and the plots a little thin in the beginning/middle area, the rest is great :D
FrozenFlare chapter 9 . 1/18/2009
Nice hehe I think that captured the air of SOM really well :D
FrozenFlare chapter 7 . 1/18/2009
I love how this chapter ends, with the same conversation with different meaning for Homunculus :D
FrozenFlare chapter 6 . 1/18/2009
So he doesn't have power over time for himself, but Eike can use his power to have power over time _
FrozenFlare chapter 5 . 1/18/2009
Hmm.. well at least he can still teleport ; and he has all his magic except time travel, it seems..

The beginning of this chapter was kind of confusing, I thought Homunculus was waiting for Eike at the Alchemist's house and there were suddenly stairs he was sitting on..
FrozenFlare chapter 4 . 1/18/2009
I love how you voice their tones, especially Homunculus's

"Without giving Eike the chance of voicing his morals, Homunculus continued on with his story." haha perfectly capturing both of them
FrozenFlare chapter 3 . 1/18/2009
Homunculus can sleep? XD
FrozenFlare chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
Ooh they're such short chapters D: but you're doing well at keeping them in character :)
FrozenFlare chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Just read the first chapter, but it looks good so far I hope the whole thing's on here :P and that you'll go through and fix some of the grammar, . But it looks good! I'll keep reading hehe
Trudyann B chapter 10 . 8/15/2008
That was a very enjoyable story! In my opinion ending A was just a bit more entertaining, but ending B made you think!