|Reviews for Shadow of Memories: Revenge is sweet|
| James Birdsong chapter 10 . 8/27/2009
| FrozenFlare chapter 10 . 1/18/2009
LOL What an awesome ending haha time paradoxes are insane!
I'm so happy you did the full story _ I feel like there could be more in the middle areas, but I understand you were just trying to jot your idea down :P
Very nice fic :D Just some grammar issues and the plots a little thin in the beginning/middle area, the rest is great :D
| FrozenFlare chapter 9 . 1/18/2009
Nice hehe I think that captured the air of SOM really well :D
| FrozenFlare chapter 7 . 1/18/2009
I love how this chapter ends, with the same conversation with different meaning for Homunculus :D
| FrozenFlare chapter 6 . 1/18/2009
So he doesn't have power over time for himself, but Eike can use his power to have power over time _
| FrozenFlare chapter 5 . 1/18/2009
Hmm.. well at least he can still teleport ; and he has all his magic except time travel, it seems..
The beginning of this chapter was kind of confusing, I thought Homunculus was waiting for Eike at the Alchemist's house and there were suddenly stairs he was sitting on..
| FrozenFlare chapter 4 . 1/18/2009
I love how you voice their tones, especially Homunculus's
"Without giving Eike the chance of voicing his morals, Homunculus continued on with his story." haha perfectly capturing both of them
| FrozenFlare chapter 3 . 1/18/2009
Homunculus can sleep? XD
| FrozenFlare chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
Ooh they're such short chapters D: but you're doing well at keeping them in character :)
| FrozenFlare chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Just read the first chapter, but it looks good so far I hope the whole thing's on here :P and that you'll go through and fix some of the grammar, . But it looks good! I'll keep reading hehe
| Trudyann B chapter 10 . 8/15/2008
That was a very enjoyable story! In my opinion ending A was just a bit more entertaining, but ending B made you think!