Reviews for Kingdom Hospital: Another Gate Keeper!
therussianbookworm chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Great story, I really enjoyed it...but you really need to work on editing and grammar. Also, a word of advice, try not to use the exclamation point to often. It can be very annoying for the reader and takes away from the story. Only use it at extremely dramatic parts. Too much and it is annoying. Love the story though, try not to take it to heart. It's just a suggestion. Have a good day!
MissSecretOne chapter 2 . 3/16/2009
amazing u have to write more plz!
sessys girl forever chapter 2 . 2/7/2009
love it cant wait for the next one
cost of nothing chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
You've got a really great idea here, it just needs a little mored editing for grammar. Keep up the good work!
Decaying Dream chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
great story, and your welcome for the editing, the most of it was missing or mispelled words, that sorta thing.