Reviews for Avatar Book 4: Air
Nikolai22 chapter 25 . 4/17/2016
P.S. (Warning... Finally rant inbound)
For fucks sake m8... The finally was so godamn long. What the fuck laddy
Too much shit. Too much rhetoric... So much fucking rhetoric.
Nikolai22 chapter 20 . 4/16/2016
(Skipped individual reviews because story is too well connected to effectively review that way)

This story is...
worth a read ##
Nikolai22 chapter 19 . 4/16/2016
Chapter 19~
Da fuuuuuuuuuuuq did I just read.
That Was strange.
What the hell have you written? What? Your Azula is too much of an enigma. I have no idea what even what. Wut da shit.
Long Feng was funny though, had the little soup stand and everything.
Nikolai22 chapter 18 . 4/15/2016
Chapter 18~
Not to shabby
Nikolai22 chapter 16 . 4/14/2016
Chapter 16~
finally caught a spelling error.
"...Azula was invisible"
LOL at least I hope that's a spelling error for invincible.
Nikolai22 chapter 15 . 4/14/2016
Chapter 15~
Gotta love the way smaller stories are weaved into the over all story.
This story reads as if it was well planned and revised. By for all I know this was just written and uploaded right away. No errors so far!
(Spelling or grammatical that I remember.)
Nikolai22 chapter 14 . 4/14/2016
Chapter 14~
As a brat once told me after beating me in battle... "REKT"
Nikolai22 chapter 13 . 4/13/2016
Chapter 13~
This shit is good.
This is one of those stories where it is hard to give per chapter reviews because when you finish a chapter you just want to keep going.
High praise to the author.
Nikolai22 chapter 11 . 4/12/2016
Chapter 11~
Damn the homie Aang got the avatar smacked outta him.

This chapter is like the halfway mark of the story. Shit gets real and bam perfect place to pause. Ya did good with this shit m8. Ya did gud
Nikolai22 chapter 10 . 4/12/2016
Chapter 10~
shinu came in clutch,
Team avatar has assembled,
And shit is happening.
And the final line was "avatar theme plays"
This hater was damn beautiful
Nikolai22 chapter 9 . 4/12/2016
Chapter 9~
I'm am enjoying this story so far.
Longshot died and the Yu Yan are hams that most people forgot about completely. I always wondered why such an elite unite that was able to easily capture the avatar was NEVER USED AGAIN
Nikolai22 chapter 7 . 4/12/2016
Chapter 7~
Deep shit about lightning creation as a firebender...
Glad you made it so.
So many authors throw around lightning as if it was the fire nation equivalent to Metlebending or water healing. I like the view that it is a thing that barely anyone can do and that it is fatal. Good one.
Nikolai22 chapter 6 . 4/12/2016
Chapter 6~
Had to re watch a few episodes to see how exactly normal fighting with bending technique would work and it doesn't seem like it would be very effective. Sounds cool but doesn't work in practice. Air bending maneuver is extremely dependent to airbendin to actually be swift and mobile. Of course, all bending is based on real fighting styles so yea that works. Still suspect.
Nikolai22 chapter 4 . 4/12/2016
Chapter 4~
"It was a horrible drawing, probably made by Toph herself."
CUT UP... he ain't even trying to cook on Sokka and still got his ass.
I approve.
Tentaigan chapter 24 . 8/17/2014
Aang returns!

This story has been amazing
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