Reviews for Avatar Book 4: Air
xavierscott chapter 25 . 12/12/2020
Great story man
Evenstar chapter 25 . 3/11/2020
Wow, what an amazing story! I was at the edge of my seat for the entire story. My heart was broken and put back together more than once. Amazing story!
Novel Defender chapter 5 . 12/28/2019
Whoa... ambitious and vengeful, where will this lead? As usual you are still keeping that Avatar like feel into this story. I would also like to say that don't be afraid of placing new characters in the story. One of many things that was great in Avatar was the exploration of the world and seeing new types of people and meeting awesome characters that quickly turned to dear friends. Don't make too many new characters as that will confuse the reader, just create one or two new people and build their stories and personality into the team. Love your work
Novel Defender chapter 4 . 12/28/2019
This one is also amazing. I always had problems with the comics, main one being how Toph's father disowned his own daughter. That seemed strange especially when he was paying just about everything to the greatest earthbenders to find his daughter he wanted to protect her not turn her into a soulless being. The father's worry of Toph getting hurt and Toph's fear of being alone and becoming a disabled prisoner is nothing short of a masterpiece. Can't wait to read more
Guest chapter 3 . 12/28/2019
This chapter was hilarious and heartwarming your impersonation with Sokka is spot on its enormously difficult to write his character without him annoyingly goofy or total douchbag. Your changing some stuff but still clearly going along the line of Legend of Korra. I would like to say don't even worry about that, this is fan fiction world of creativity go all in. Loving your work
Novel Defender chapter 2 . 12/28/2019
Whoa Admiral Zhao! I thought it would be Azula or Ozai or someone loyal to them. Awesome twist! You are definitely a fantastic writer and is far better than the average typist in the fan community. Please keep writing I am officially hooked.
Novel Defender chapter 1 . 12/28/2019
I have read a LOT of fan fiction from DC Teen Titans, to Marvel, through Star Wars, and a few more. I'm a writer myself but I read these fan stories to see what die hard and normal fan want to read and if they like it. So far yours is the best on I've read and not just for fan fiction this surpasses the "official" comics and canon stories I read. Spot on :)
Nikolai22 chapter 25 . 4/17/2016
P.S. (Warning... Finally rant inbound)
For fucks sake m8... The finally was so godamn long. What the fuck laddy
Too much shit. Too much rhetoric... So much fucking rhetoric.
Nikolai22 chapter 20 . 4/16/2016
(Skipped individual reviews because story is too well connected to effectively review that way)

This story is...
worth a read ##
Nikolai22 chapter 19 . 4/16/2016
Chapter 19~
Da fuuuuuuuuuuuq did I just read.
That Was strange.
What the hell have you written? What? Your Azula is too much of an enigma. I have no idea what even what. Wut da shit.
Long Feng was funny though, had the little soup stand and everything.
Nikolai22 chapter 18 . 4/15/2016
Chapter 18~
Not to shabby
Nikolai22 chapter 16 . 4/14/2016
Chapter 16~
finally caught a spelling error.
"...Azula was invisible"
LOL at least I hope that's a spelling error for invincible.
Nikolai22 chapter 15 . 4/14/2016
Chapter 15~
Gotta love the way smaller stories are weaved into the over all story.
This story reads as if it was well planned and revised. By for all I know this was just written and uploaded right away. No errors so far!
(Spelling or grammatical that I remember.)
Nikolai22 chapter 14 . 4/14/2016
Chapter 14~
As a brat once told me after beating me in battle... "REKT"
Nikolai22 chapter 13 . 4/13/2016
Chapter 13~
This shit is good.
This is one of those stories where it is hard to give per chapter reviews because when you finish a chapter you just want to keep going.
High praise to the author.
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