|Reviews for The Homecoming|
| Regin Ash chapter 4 . 9/23/2012
Aw, is that it? Please write more. i know you updated like... a looooonnngg time ago. but hopefully you give it another try. :D
| amoomoo4me chapter 4 . 9/13/2009
i like it. we need newcomer/human relatinships in these stories.
| StealthLiberal chapter 3 . 6/1/2009
I'm very glad to see that you are continuing this story. There are too few fanfics out there for Alien Nation. Anyway, I do enjoy the fact that you are using how humans in relationships with Tenctonese would be targets in their own right for the Purists. Something about being "race traitors" I think was how they put it in one of the movies.
Having said that, the flow was a bit jumpy, you have some very good segments here, but you seem to have a bit of trouble tying them together. Keep plugging onthis story and it will come to you, or you could use the services of a beta reader. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to reading more.
| Yasunari chapter 2 . 11/21/2008
Awesome story. It's well written with few grammatical errors.
| Alucard 1024 chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Great story, I love it!
| Jaylithe chapter 2 . 8/25/2008
Very good. Please write more. I enjoyed the 1st two chapters greatly.
| Captain Grin chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
Oh col! Seriously! Please, please, please continue!